Oww that was so lovely and beautiful!

I love how you use the command cards idea!
the part when Clark tried to make Chloe sleep was so sexy! owo!

Thanks for the fic :)

no! that CAN"T be the end! Things were just getting good! Please, pretty please add another chapter? Please?

i love how Clark is completely oblivious to the things he do and say that make Jimmy and Lana feel awkward. Him not giving a damn about Jimmy's reactions are hilarious. Great story :)

man u so need to do a seqwel to this fic if for no other reason then to have jimmy and lana freak when thay see them together

very funny story...I love him :)

Great story! I loved the ending with the command cards! Adding this one to favs right now! :)

What can I say, I love me some Chlark. I’m sad that this story has come to an end, but I am looking forward to reading BHTM and of course your Xmas Fic.

Good Story

Well that was another wonderful story from you! :)

Man Alicia was beyond crazy.

Did Clark really think Chloe would leave him alone with that psycho? Is it wrong that I'm really glad that he broke her wrist since it saved her life from loony tunes.

Chloe sure knew how to get Clark to use those command cards up. And those last few were perfect.

Clark's epiphany about his and Lana relationship versus his with Chloe was great. Glad the BDA figured everything out on his own.

Again great story.

Another great chapter & great ending.

So, I never freak you out? Wow, call me crazy, (hey, I heard that) but that sounds like a challenge to me;) Now, I just have to think of something that could totally freak you out. Well, if you truly are naive to 'box stuffing', I suppose explaining it to you could freak you out. Of course, I'd rather just show you;) See, now you have no idea what I'm implying there, so my perviness is just wasted. Oh well.

I think a Lana POV story could be good. That is if there's a heavy dose of Chlark;) And I totally know what you mean about POV not being all that hard. I recently wrote a POV piece myself and found it rather interesting. But I don't know why you'd think writing a love scene from Chloe's POV would be difficult. I mean, since you're putting yourself in her shoes, you're just describing what you and Clark are doing in the boudoir. See, I knew that kinky sex stuff was all you;) Oh, and you're welcome. I like all of your stuff, and I'm not just talking about your writing;)

I've gotta say, I love how you closed this one out. I knew Alicia was crazy, but what the hell was she thinking? I mean, if she kills Chloe, Clark's bestest best friend and soul mate, did she really think Clark would just get over it and hook up with her? Talk about not planning ahead. But then, what do you expect from psychos?

And Chloe...steadfast and true to the end, or almost end, as it were. I'm a little surprised she didn't follow Clark's command to leave. She obeyed every other command, even under protest. But, she would never abandon Clark, so I can forgive her faux pas just this once. I was pleasantly surprised that Chloe actually worried that she could have killed Alicia after she stabbed her with the nail file. It's good to know, that even in the face of death and psychotic meteor freaks, she still has a strong sense of right and wrong.

Just what was Clark doing after he dumped Chloe at the hospital and left? He was probably moping, but I'd like to think he was dumping Lana's skinny ass, so he could make his move on Chloe;) But he was also probably stewing in his own juices, working up a nice lather to unleash on Chloe. Man, does everything I say sound dirty, or is it just me?

I loved, LOVED Chlark's confrontation at Chloe's apartment. It's always nice to see a good heated exchange between these two. It's not often that Clark ever really gets worked up, and I think it's therapeutic for him to have a nice shouting match every once in a while. And if it happens to be with Chloe, and happens to lead to a little "stress relief" of a different kind, well, so much the better;)

Finally, Clark gets his head out of his ass and uses the command cards as they were originally intended, to seduce Chloe;) You know, she sure encouraged his rapid use of those cards at the end there. I wonder if she really wanted him to use them all up, or if she wanted him to get into the flow of using them so he could get her right where she wanted him to get her. Hmmm...either way, I think since her gift of command cards worked out so well, I bet she'll be giving him even more in the near future.

And that sequence of commands leading up to the kiss at the end was HOT! It sure got me worked up. Although, I was a little disappointed that it ended with JUST a kiss. I was hoping things would go a bit further, after all, he still had 5 cards left;)

All in all, a terrific story. Now, I just need to find a way to speed up time so that it's already January. Can't wait for BHTM!

wow great ending! looking forward to the next story :)

I didn't even saw "complete" when i start read this chapter, anyway this is wonderful ending...

Loved it! :-)

That was wonderful!

Clark should have known that Chloe would never leave his side especially in a situation like that.

What a great use of those command cards.