Eh, naming a fish Yu is no worse than naming a cat Neko. My sister named her cat that.

Great story!

Oh, that was excellent! I loved the proposal and them not even noticing the fireworks in the sky for their own up on the tower.

HA! I knew it! Can't fool Mom! You write their thoughts and actions very well, I could feel the heartbreak and emptiness the both of them were feeling.

Great chapter, like him explaining it all to his dad. It seems that Roxanne is of the mind that she's going to stay on Earth no matter what, and be content with monthly visits if he stays on Azullon. That's hard ... talk about your long-distance relationships, and him there with women of his own kind all over him ... eeeek. Make the right choice, Megs!

Oh, dear! He has to decide to stay on Earth, he simply must! We will all cry if he leaves. I keep thinking that Lactea must have caught snippets of emotions between Megs and Roxanne, wonder why she's staying quiet about it?

That's very sweet. Great descriptions of the party. Megs should have had a guilty pang when he saw Roxanne had no problem introducing him as her boyfriend.

This is really very good story development! I hope Megamind is clear with Roxanne that he wants to be with her, whichever planet the two of them decide to live on permanently. And still no telling his parents about their relationship. Hmmm.

I like it a lot, the descriptions and dialog ring true to the Megaverse. And just when are they finally going to tell his parents that he and Roxanne are more than friends? They said they would at the lair so they could have Minion for backup.

Wow, way cool. It will be great to see his home planet through his eyes, and share it with Roxanne. I don't think she should worry, there is no way he's going to want to leave her behind, and I think after all he put the city through over the years, he might feel some sense of responsibility toward the citizens ... he'd recall how big of a douche Metro Man looked like just walking away from the people that depended on him.

Very cool! The story is unfolding nicely. How neat for Megamind to get to show off his inventions and see his parents proud of him. It's a Christmas miracle!

I think it's sweet showing them both dealing with the holidays without the presence of loved ones. They've been harder on me since my Mom died, that's really a time of the year that's about family, and we loved to decorate the house & the tree. Shame their kiss had to be interrupted.

I think that's a very good opening, good descriptions of their society. I'm not sure how to pronounce Megamind's given name Ouwan. Maybe that will be cleared up later on.

Awwwww! They are so cute together! I loved this story! Thank you for writing it!

Brilliant story! I liked how you described Azullon. It was a great idea! Keep up the good work.