Reviews for Third
BlushingNeko chapter 11 . 10/6/2013
I loved this story. I've been looking for a good Near fanfic for a while. My guess was that maybe her friend was the one that tracked her location by her phone, for the whammy children. I really enjoyed reading this FF, you're a great Authour, be proud.
hts911 chapter 9 . 4/28/2011
I was expecting something big but definately not this. Most people would have them work out and i give you major props for the originality of the idea. Your story was amazing.
WillCosplayForFood chapter 9 . 4/1/2011
I hate you ;A;

howww aree youu sooo amazinggllyyy good at writing? im waist-deep in jelousy. ANYWAY! i loved~ and i liked the way it ened :P you know...the death and all xD
LeahKeehl13 chapter 11 . 1/8/2011
Lol I should b studying rite now but instead I was reading this...totally made my day ;D
stebba1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Amazing fantastic writing, you are the greatest, and now for the positives.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
...3

Very well written, and a good idea.

It seems very... real, like it's a real DN novel. I want more!
LeahKeehl13 chapter 9 . 12/24/2010
The last chapter was super good! I'm sad it's over though...This was a great story. :D
Foam Weber chapter 9 . 12/23/2010
Awesome! :D I win! This chapter made my day XD. Could you explain the code a bit? I'm still confuzzled :P.
Foam Weber chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
Waaait- what was the test, again? XD. This story is cool I appreciate her smacking Near- he deserved it :D. She should totally be guilty in the end, though. That would be awesome, and unexpected ;P. Please update soon!
LeahKeehl13 chapter 6 . 12/18/2010
Another awesome chapter! :D
Superhyperrilestoolazy2login chapter 6 . 12/17/2010
I love this story and it's amazingness. (i had tried to write a lengthy review but my phone didnt want me too..)
-riiley
theawsomesarah chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
Love this chapter :) well i love all your chapters, but thats besides the point!

Im glad you cleared up how Hope knew so much. I'm realy getting into this story and want to read more so please update soon :)
Ms-Pseudo-Writer chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
As usual, that was amazing! Keep up the good work! I kept wondering in chapter 3 if this new Kira is Beyond Birthday from the LABB murder cases...hnm...
-Riley
theawsomesarah chapter 3 . 12/9/2010
love this new chapter :)

im curious, how does Hope know so much about the Death note?

anyways, this story is fantastic so please update soon!
theawsomesarah chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
this story is awsome so far!

i dont want hope to be the killer through:(

please update soon :)
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