Awwwwwwww! So sweet! I couldn't stop smiling XDDD
Love it! It made my day :3

super cute! glad I found this!

good story

More! :) 3

that was sweet )

Dear TheaBlackthorn,

Brilliant! It's actually the first time I have ever read a NarutoXKakashi as I tend to enjoy the father/son bonding more. It was well written and the personalities were captured great! It was interesting and I definately wouldn't mind another chapter! Too bad :P

Once again it was a great read! Take care!

- Akira Kuran

.HOT!

Love the fluff and the teasing at the end, lol :D

Great one-shot!

AWWWW It's so cute! KakaNaru ish my favorite pairing!

nice story! they are so cute XD love kakanaru

interesting! I look forward to where you take this!

*GASP!*

Kakashi is uke?

OMG... If he is, I am sooo in love with you right now... (Maybe not you.. Your ideas perhaps? lol)

I hope there's more?

Pwetty pwease...?

I always see/read many people spelled wrong names like 'Masashi Kishimoto' you spelled that wrong. And, i read this story of yours that you write 'Naruto shared with his father the Sandaime, the warm tone of his skin, the slightly longer sunny locks,' Naruto's father is the fourth hokage or you can say THE YONDAIME, the sandaime is the old man! Well, i... Um... I suggest that this fiction is 'Rated T'

Well, this is all that I got :) and, this is not a flame or anything, btw: good story you should make some :D

Ganbatte! (The English is: Good luck !)

I liked the way you portrayed these two. It comes across as something more than just basic lust or attraction; instead, there is a genuine and deep element involved.

Good work, Thorn!