Wow. You just fucked this story hard. I hate when stupid writers destroy their own story. Pathetic doesn’t cover how I feel about your plot writing ability now.

Glad Sakura isn't as useless as she is in canon.

Pretty good chapter.

This is both intresting and respectful to the charcters.

The couple last chapter got the tear works going.
Now this is what I call a story.
Too bad it have discontinued.
Would of been an awesome story to kept on reading.

The is pure dog shit

It's so freaking awesome

Sigh. The Unconscious no Jutsu is too damned overpowered.
And overused -cough-

Life changing experiences don't mean s*** in this story

This story is not readable any longer. There is just so many things wrong with it. Tsunade punched into his stomach it was bleeding all over yet she healed it, Kabuto cuts his hand and she is paralyzed with fear, it doesn’t make any sense at all. An other thing is he is superbly trained and powerful yet he uses an incomplete Jutsu against Tsunade? And finally that fight with Kabuto was ridiculous and the last straw as far as me reading any further on this story.

This chapter was all over the place, Kyuubi is Uber powerful, Shukaku is the weakest yet Kyuubi lost? Orochimaru someone is able to take Minato’s soul out of the Shinigami, while he should have no arms from the hokage sealing them? There is just a million things wrong with this, how did Naruto turn into a huge blond kitsune?

How would Naruto know about the Tenshi Byakugan?

He has huge chakra reserves without using the Kyuubi, but here he can’t even run far with the extra seal?

I just finished your story I absolutely loved it but it's been 4 years and I am wondering if it is ever going to get updated again or if it's just discontinued

great story and fanfic i would love if you could continue or skip to the time when he returns would be great but great work