its really sad that this. and most of your other story's stoped. they were good in more ways than one. where ever you are. i hope you'll continue these one day.

Are you ever going to continue the story? I want to see who the newcomer is and how the story progresses?

Shame you decided to drop the story I was really enjoying the idea of a quarian harem. You and your friend did an excellent job writing the smut scenes and the overall plot was engaging and enjoyable.

God, why did you drop this amazingly kinky story!
Seriously, I want to know! PM me! Tell me why!

A female can orgasm hundreds, even thousands of times during intercourse before entering their refractory period. A male, however, can only orgasm a couple of times during intercourse before entering the refractory period. Strange huh? Anyway, good detail mate. Not very common lately.

I don't know if you've abandoned the story or lost inspiration for it, but I hope that you continue the story. Besides the intriguing premise, you've put a lot of detail into the descriptive scenes and character interaction which I really enjoy. The plot progression is also well done and feels natural and fitting. Hoping to see you write again someday

Hello all, I am currently working on a project and I need some quarian names I apologize to Secret Writter if he becomes offended by my message but pm me your ideas for the name of the quarians ( female names please, I am all set on male names). Check out my bio, and this story is good

dude you still alive its been 2 freaking years get on with it already

Dude, you can't just end it like that, please give it a happy ending, or atleast continue it but not like this man

are you going to continue please?

Shepard in this story seems to be Abit helpless, he is a warrior who has fought in many battles yet Iya knocks him out like he is a simple civilian and from the way it looks like Shepard is gonna raped.

Still a good story, though I prefer stories stories were the main character is badass and were it is near impossible to take him/her down. I just hope this dosn't turn into another story where the main character is strong and badass but when a woman barely taps him he collapses without a fight (There are stories like this, they make the character pathetic incarnate against woman but say he is the best in a fight even when they always lost against a woman)

P.S - I am not sexists, as some have called me, I just hate it when a writer takes a great and powerful character and make him submit like a little bitch when a woman even looks at him, fighting or not.

Really good chapter! Please update soon!

Enjoying your story so far. Love the Quarians, they we're my favorite race by far in Mass Effect.

Hope to see an update soon.

I think this whole story is interesting. You should do one with Xen and Shepard.

I want to see Xen and Shepherd lemon. :p