Ohhhhh how cute 3 that was just wonderful especially at the end. Very well written again and it was really sweet as Jess read to her and hold himself back as he was confronted with Dean. And it was great to read, that Rory finally sent him to hell D.

And the Lorelai .. haha too funny: 'Ok honey. I'm not happy about this and I want the ful version with all the ugly details tonight, ok? And I hope you're still a virgin by then!"' ... yeah.. thats what the mothers always keep on hoping, until we are 50 years or so - - and that was a good written part too: '"Ok, bye kids. Have fun, or when I think about it, don't have fun. Don't do anything that you think could be fun at all."' .. so it was veery well all in all.

I loved reading it and I like your style of writing, so please continue and keep up the good work, you're doing great ;)

Greetings!

Oh she called D (and there we go again... hum.. )

Thats great and now even Rory realised that Dean is a stupid guy xD. I liked when Jess said: 'I didn't want to destroy that, that's his job.' - well! .. succeeded.. I would say Nice chapter really and now they are gonna meet each other again, very sweet and very exciting-

And she's getting nervous huh? ... well who can resent her for that, given the fact that Jess is a veery goodlooking guy P!

So .. I'm gonna read the next chapter!

Good work again (by the way).

Greetings

Wow what a town! (yes! another beginning ;D )

First, all the people seem to know everything, who is with whom and when a person is going or coming back. Thats kinda scary isn't it? Hum..

And then there it is! Deans part of town huh? -haha- ridiculous! But very nice in inbuilt! And its also good that Jess isn't fighting back as Dean got pissy, 'cause that would have ruined his whole image again (well it is already ruined..but.. whatever -)

Reading the next one...

Ohh ( (yeah I know - my feedback always starts with an 'Oh' .. I can't help it xD )

Rory's letter was really realistic, it was very sad though, that she does wanna talk to him, but not more ( at least in the near future) .. but how Jess cutely pointed out: 'Besides she had let the option for something more later.' .. haha .. thats indeed true! It I hope it is going to happen. The both of them fit together so well!

Soo great Chapter again and again really well written. Up to the next it is then!

Ohhh how cute 3

So he's back again, thats very sweet! And he sent her the letter to inform her and to apologyse. Well.. I hope this time he can keep his promise and is not going to leave again. But it sounded quite serious and I liked how you wrote the letter!

I also liked how you described her feelings, as she wanted to read the letter but at the same time, was scared to do just that! ... So ..and she had her best night since his departure huh? Nice -

So again, great chapter and I am gonna read the next one right away!

Heyhey )

Well, poor guy, has to climb trough the window just to give her that damn thing. And I felt quite sorry with him, as he thought about the possibility of the fact that she wouldn't read some of the books anymore. And its quite thrilling, because now I wanna know what he left for written indeed! Nice style of writing as always ;) And I am off to read the next chapter!

Greetings

Good job

Good Story

good story

Wonderful!

It was good, I mean there were sentences that didn't fit my personal taste as a writer, but all in all it was good :)

This is such a good story! I wish Jess would of punch Dean, Dean is such a jerk! :) Anyway, I'm hooked with this, please update soon! I love it! :)

Short but good, more soon please.

good job

Wow