Btw,... I'm beyond PISSED at this book so FAR! YOU REALLY ARE A TRUE DICK HEAD! I curse you upon THE DEATH BED! HA! I said the TRUTH Stupid!/ I am half robot, and mortal too; so don't push your luck! I have Sharp Metallic Claws ready to pierce who Ever Now messes with me!

this is a really horrible chapter man! why write a stupid part in the book?! i bet you don't even stick around, and that makes you BEYOND THE MOST IDIOTIC PERSON! hope you get Covid~19! Btw,... You SUCK and you have the worst brain EVER!

I kinda like the book for now. Btw, I want you 2 write more whenever! and, i hope You add some true romantic~ness later on in the story! i want to read some real juicy parts in the story! (;}) 3 3 invader zim rules! victory! 1#

So...no consequences for Dib being a giant asshat?

I will say I appreciate this story so well and I'm glad it's made. It shows more stories like this keep characters like them and the show alive by making these stories. And I'm glad people our showing more of Gaz and Dib in this type of article that is not just about Zim. So thank you for creating this masterpiece.

nice

Cooooo coooo *flutter in*
"I rather liked the third sentence in the third to last paragraph. It makes me feel warm about the couple, so sweet.
I didn't notice the story was also continued/finished until I visited your profile to snoop and thought, "Oh yeah, I wonder if other stories are also worked on- oh, hey, yay!" So, thank you. This was a pleasant surprise. I made sure to reread it from the beginning so that I could truly appreciate it."

Yes! it wasn't cheezy at the end! (and finally a story that doesnt end with a kiss)
Thumbs up for this one!

The thought of gaz fills you with DETERMINATION. (had to, sorry!)

I like liked the last line, it has some truth to it.

How does Zim know about Star Wars?

Dib's gonna die.

Holy crap. That was SO good. I read this a few months ago when it was unfinished and I stumbled upon it in all its finished glory tonight. Reread the whole thing and that ending was majestic. :') Lol. I hope you're reading the Zim comics as they give me the warm and fuzzies. And thank you for writing this. It was lovely (but never really clear why Zim didn't want to make physical contact with his hands?) But yes. Gir would be proud of this masterpiece. ;)

I like how you didn't go with the "cliché first kiss" ending, and I love third wheel Dib :) Great story! I loved reading this!

Well I can say this, Gaz and Zim being together was never meant to be easy but they made it but of course some irony has to happen and Gaz now is sick, I'm with Zim, I blame Dib for that!

But unlike the annoying bug headed boy, Gaz will get the best medical care if Zim has anything to say about it, heh heh heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.