Interesting so far. I'm curious to see where this story goes. Hope you update soon.

I love your writing! :3 KEEP ON UPDATING
BTW. "Luigi was preening himself" rather than "Luigi was pruning himself" C:

Haha, love this, especially the Teenee and Tainee part! D Looking forward to updates

Wow! I love this story and can't wait for it to be updated!

The detail for one, is amazing, and the cliffhangers such as: What does Daisy know that Luigi doesn't, where DID Mario go, and will Bowser attack in the usual manner or something more in the stealth area, keep people reading and reviewing.

I am a huge fanof the mystery genre and I think you are doing an awesome job!

Wow! Cliffhanger alert! Cliffhanger alert! Please update ASAP! As long as you add more, I'm gonna review every chapter! This is great!

-GC XD

Ooh! Well you caught my attention!

The only thing I would suggest is that you define the changes in the setting by using the line feature or doing 'x.x.x' or something along those lines.

I'll be surely looking out for this!

-TNFG