Fantastic story please tell me you haven't abandoned it

Ahhh! I love Allie! One of my favorite's OC so far! Please update soon!

Okay, I gotta let you know, this is SUCH a good story! Seriously, I love this, I love Allie, I love how you portray everyone...yeah, huge fan here. It's just such a shame that it hasn't been updated in a while! I hope everything is going well for you in college, that obvs comes first, but I also hope you'll eventually come back to this story. I can tell a lot of other people love it too! Have the best day ever! 3

Absolutely love this story! Please update it. I really can't wait to see how it ends. Update soon

Pleaseeeeeeee update this story! I don't usually like a fanfic where the OC just stumbles in the Yugioh World but this has honestly been one of my favorite story EVER! Allie is just so hilarious and I actually can relate to her. So please update this fanfic when you can!

Update please! This is an awesome story! Favorited.

If you don't mind cussin, Undead, Hollywood Undead. Can't wait for dartz arc!

I couldn't stop laughing at Allie an Marik. They are funny together.

For a min, I thought Marik was going to say, "I will take the Pharaoh's LeatherPants!" Instead of "Millenuim Puzzle"... :3

I watch to much LittleKoriboh

I got the middle ring joke. I started laughing so hard, cuz that's what came to my mind first. xD

Allie! Dnt lose the duel! Dueling can be 4 gals too! Ishizu duels! Tea, Mai, and sometimes serenity duels... Damn it... I ranting... again. : Go Allie!

Wow theres a lot of crazy things going on here and im interested by all of it. Cant wait to see more.
KEEP UP GREAT WORK!
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UPDATE SOON!

Haha, Allie is very funny. I mean, she's boderlining a Mary Sue, but her saving grace is her humor and horrible abillity to play Duel Monsters. I mean, not horrible, at least she ain't PERFECT. I love the witty banter going on between Bakura and Allie. Though...I would expect her to be a little more worried about the things Bakura does. I mean yeah, it's all fun and games, but there also has to be those dark and emotional stuff too. Just a suggestion.

Wow. An OC story that I enjoy. My applause goes to you. Love the Bakura arc! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

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(Falls down in a fit of laughter) Man that was funners. Anyways looking forward to reading the nextl chapters. :)