Reviews for Subtlety |
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ElealehBlue chapter 1 . 3/17/2017 Oh, my gosh! I absolutely LOVE this concept! Well done! |
Tie-dyed Trickster chapter 1 . 1/25/2017 This is a beautiful fanfiction and you DEFINITELY heard it from me! I love this idea, it's really interesting, and also really sweet to think about the entire freaking town putting on an act so that Danny can have a semi-normal life at times, to think that they're all actually watching out for him and that he's not as alone in this fight as he thinks he is. Thank-you writing this, I loved reading it, and really enjoyed this delightfully witty version of Paulina! |
553Colinm chapter 1 . 10/19/2016 Awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2016 damn |
Atsuyuri-sama chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 This was really well-done, and an amazing concept! Nicely done! (TBH, I thought the narrator was Kwan at first... I have no idea why, especially when Paulina noted Dash was her boyfriend (suppose my slash goggles are on a bit too tight?), but it certainly was an interesting way, through no fault of your own, to start out this fic! Thought it might make you laugh, too. ;D) -a-s |
Metallicpotato chapter 1 . 3/15/2016 Wow, my opinion on a character has never changed so suddenly and drastically! I really like how you wrote this as Paulina. She and other characters could have used a bit more development in the show. It's so sweet how everyone is keeping Danny's secret for him, since they all know how important it is, but I can't help but imagine his reaction when he finds out that they know! |
May-Rene chapter 1 . 3/14/2016 I loved this! This is one of the few were Paulina has substance to her. She's actually existed and isn't just some shallow bitch. She's keeping Danny's secret and so is everyone else. It's a good take on this kind of senario. I'm glad Haiju posted the link. |
jaldkfjas chapter 1 . 3/13/2016 That was very lovely and very well written |
ZealousChristian24 chapter 1 . 2/17/2016 Well done! A delightful, somewhat introspective piece. 10/10. |
Phantom J. Ryder chapter 1 . 1/18/2016 Wow. I've NEVER heard that take before, but it was splendid. Paulina is a hard character to write, simply because it's hard to know where she stands in the intelligent factor. But you did well. The idea that almost the entire town knows his identity is interesting, and quite engaging. I wish I could find more stories on this. -Jane |
neeniya chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 Awww this is adorable. It perfectly answers why Danny was able to get away with transforming in broad daylight. If you've ever heard of the fanon character Wes, then there could be so many silly stories here. Wes is apparently not in the know of keeping Danny's secret (if we're following this story's events). Really nice fic. |
Cabbit and the Weasel chapter 1 . 9/19/2015 I think that was one of the sweetest things i've ever read. |
NeverisaDork chapter 1 . 9/8/2015 This is great and I love it! |
CatalystOfTheSoul chapter 1 . 9/7/2015 I featured this at .com, because people did a little bit of screaming over the "everyone knows, but no one stops to help him" au that's going around; somebody referenced this fic in response to that conversation. Thanks for writing! It's kind of a really tragic idea. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015 Really interesting idea. I like the depth you added to all the characters, you fleshed the plot out nicely. Great writing! |