SO HOT!
I loved the spanking and slapping so much. This is one hot piece of a fanfiction!
I really enjoyed this immensely, maybe even more than I should have.
Great work!
Love, Hikaru

'Course he does, he's KAU after all!
And boy is he hawt!
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-fans herself-
...Yummy...
Sayonara,
Lolita

Yes what a good boy he is... So cute! Kau is Arbitro's cute little slave dog Man they have suck a kinky sadist relationship xD But I love it nonetheless, it's what makes them special! Nice fanfic! Thank you for writing! :)

Oh, I'm so lucky to star reading your texts from the lighter ones to the harder ones.
Gosh, I'm breathless, That was a masterpiece. Though I wouldn't argue of you made Kau come twice. XDDD
Just loved.
And hell you know how to end your stories, loved this from the beginning to the very end. fantastic delicious.
I'm favoriting this one.

Now, let's go to the last Royal Treatment.

So far so good.
but Thumbs up for this one.

This was so... sweet. All of your Arbitro/Kau fics have an element of fluff to them - and this one contains a bit less than some, but nevertheless, it was sweet.
I love the way you portray their relationship. Even if, from an outside point of view, the relationship is a bit - as some may say - "fucked up," the way you write it from Arbitro's point of view gives it an element of realism, and definitely does their shared affection justice.
This is a bit of a personal connection, but I have a fascination (though not an affinity for, to be certain) with D/s relationships, particularly the aspect of obedience and, by virtue, allowing another to take care of you. Though you only touch on the subject lightly in this particular fic, I know you've explored it in some of your other pieces, so I wanted to mention that as well.
Despite saying nothing, I imagine Kau is a hard character to render. He cannot express his sentiments verbally, so it's up to Kau (and, ultimately, the writer) to make them clear with nonverbals. I imagine that can be a bit difficult at times, but you do it so well, and so believably. You also touch on that subject within your writing itself, which I think is great, as that dynamic is so interesting yet is rarely touched upon so thoroughly.
I also enjoy how affectionate you've made Arbitro. Some have interpreted his character to be purely sadistic, and while he most definitely possess that trait, I saw some tenderness (albeit of a slightly twisted nature, by "normal" standards) in him as well, and I'm very pleased with how you've expressed that facet of him as well. And you captured that so well in the very last line, "...he realized that Kau looked perfect even in the dark." That line really stuck out to me over all, so I wanted to make note of that as well.

Basically: I just think you're totally fantastic and that you should definitely continue writing for this couple (or just writing in general, though I of course want you to write for this couple in particular) because you just do it so darn well.

I love this story it gave me the chills... I'm totally subscribing to you. I cant wait until your next story.

I love it! -

love and your other two togainu stories! sad only a few with kau :( gotta make one later on!

You really write these two so wonderfully! Please write more wonderful fan fiction maybe something with Kau out and about with Gunji and Kiwar XD I think I shall fave this one 3

Kai