love it write more

i love it

omg that's so beautiful. LOVED IT!

Descriptive, good vocabulary and nice imagery. I enjoyed it though I have to agree with the other reviewer, it does give an abrupt ending. The layout is good. It just feels that you can add a lot more scenes to the story. Do reconsider!

Hi. I know that this story may be familiar to some of you. That's because I used to be 'drkmagiciangrl25' and then I changed my name to 'starfairy25'. The reason why I deleted all of my stories and my profile on that account and made this new one was because another user said that they were going to flame my stories and was harassing me. I was just standing up to that person because they were breaking the rules of this website. Other users have done the same thing to that person. I blocked that person but they have more than one account. I believe that person is a troll. Thank you for your time and reading this.

This is not your story, it's by an author named drkmagiciangrl125. She may not have it up anymore but this story was posted in 2007. ?typecategories&catid10&PHPSESSID

This fiction seems to abrupt and incomplete. If you're willing, I think this fiction would be a lot better if you changed it to an M-rating and went into more detail.