wish chapter was a bit longer

darien is definitely the only choice for Serena! Love the plot!

I LOVED it! I totally agree with what you said about Darien being the better choice, he's loved her like literally forever and he was there first so ya snooze ya lose. Plus idk what seiya is supposed to be boy or girl? I've yet to decide... Anyways this story was fantabulous and you should soooo write a sequel!

Wow, I really loved this story. I seriously can't believe you have so few reviews, this is the kind of story I expect to see 100...

You are a fantastic writer, and I just loved the whole premise! The three of them growing up together, and Seiya and Darien falling for her! Great idea.

The only criticism I could offer is that I thought it ended too soon, I would have like to see a bit more, maybe Seiya forgiving Serena, and finding someone else to love...

Otherwise this was great, and it's definitely going on my favourite's list!

awwwwwww... is all i can say...this story was great...short&sweet.

I loved this story it was so sweet.

Chelbacca, I usually do not write reviews unless I truly have enjoyed the story. I can honestly say that I enjoyed your story and appreciate the time and effort you put into it. It takes a lot of heart and dedication to write a story and then be brave enought to submit it; even if it is just online. I could not agree more with you that you should follow your heart and that Darien and Serena loved each other in two different (well techincally three in you count Crystal Tokyo) lifetimes. If that is not true love I don't know what is. Thank you again for sharing your talent and please continue on writing.

Super sweet!

beeeeeaaaaauuuutiful!

I TOTALLY agree about them being made for each other, I disliked Seiya with a passion, no offence Seiya lovers, I mean, guy or girl? human looks like a guy, scoutish thingy looks like a girl?

But anyways, I love how you put this story together and I really enjoyed the suspense of it all, you did well to make it so long, many people would have done that in 1 chapter and that would have been boring! Again, I congratulate you on your excellent masterpiece!

enjoyed reading this. i always keep coming back to read new serena/darien fics and this was no disappointment. i also liked the fact that the other guy was seiya since i like the darien/sarena/seiya.

darien and serena 3

Great story!

awesome story am a Darien and Serena fan all the way!

Perfect ending. I totally agree with you on the Seiya issue...to confusing and kind of weird.

WONDERFUL READ! You did a great job!