Reviews for Wheel of Fire
oi770 chapter 18 . 3/13/2018
Lovely! Great!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/25/2015
I adore, absolutely adore, how you write these characters. They are beyond real, not above petty concerns, nor below sacrificing for something greater. I didn't just like these people you wrote, I also judged them, disliked them, empathized for, was upset by, and cheered them on. Beyond real. Thank you, please write more.
Orchidellia chapter 18 . 2/3/2014
This is an amazing collection of stories. Your Shepard is kind of bonkers, but it really fits the sly, teasing Thane you've created. Their relationship is so *real*. There's no other way to describe it. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading every single chapter, and if you write more, I'd be so pleased. But if not, I can always read them again.
lunar47 chapter 18 . 4/23/2012
I loved these pieces :)
Scarlette Bee chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
DAMN! That was amazing! Thane taking the literal initiative and flinging off his jacket rocked my socks! I love how you have them interacting, especially him learning how to joke around now from being with Shepard and Garrus long enough XD
Willow in Winter chapter 18 . 12/28/2011
I thoroughly enjoyed every one of these chapters, and thought them all to be very well written and developed. I even laughed at loud at the bit where the floor was lava, an accomplishment for any fic. Very well done!
LuffyMarra chapter 18 . 11/30/2011
Great stories. Keep going please.
LuffyMarra chapter 17 . 11/30/2011
I like this chapter. It's an interesting twist on why Thane joined the group. U should keep going with it.
LucyvasNormandy chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
"Look at it this way, only your body will be naked. Your soul is safe." I laughed for five minutes straight. Hilarious! You are able to mix the perfect amount of humor into your stories. One minute I was laughing, and the next minute I was realizing how horrible it would be if I were in Shepard's position. Poor Thane and his Siha :( I really hope they cure him for ME3!
Siren's Call chapter 12 . 3/8/2011
I love it.

Is there any chance of you writing anything a bit more... explicit? (Geez, that sounded completely perverted...)
Siha Shap chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
This is good, very funny, and sad. Well done.
Emantsal chapter 17 . 12/19/2010
Cool! Very interesting plot line. I would definitely like to see this continue. Anything you write is good. You could probably write a grocery list and make it interesting...
112358132134 chapter 17 . 12/19/2010
I AM INTRIGUED AND WOULD LIKE TO SUBSCRIBE TO THIS NEWSLETTER.

No, but seriously, I love this plotline. I recall another fic starting along these lines (think by hyperbali?), but not involving the Alliance and certainly not as such. As I'm more or less in utter adoration with about (if not completely) everything you've written, I absolutely call for this to be continued.
Matyrfae chapter 17 . 12/18/2010
Interesting concept for Thane...I want to read more about this :)
MyFix chapter 16 . 12/18/2010
I love your Shep and Thane!

Always trying to one-up each other.

Loved that chapter too!
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