Oh my. All I can say is, you put the Scabior/Hermione music video with "Darkest Emotion" into words for me. Thank you.

This was written beautifully, cheers to Tvtrope for bringing me here! I absolutely love it when I find a good fic where all the characters are IC.

I love the imagery in this, and how it ties in perfectly to the novel. Beautifully written.

Hot like sunshine and sweet like flowers. That's my impression of this fic. Very exciting and sensual. Love it!

Really great writing and I like how you filled in the story with extra parts involving his sense of the chase. Hope to hear more from you-

Good story keep updating! (:

hmmm... mabey this should be rated m? its very good and perfectly in charecter.

oh my God, I think this is my new favourite Scabmione fic.

Wow. This was really nicely done. I think you did a great job with this. Awesome work!

This is so, so well written. You've captured Scabior so incredibly well here, and it's strangely haunting and chilling. I love how you write his obsession, his madness, it's pure talent.

This is just great, the best ScabiorHermione I've read on this site.

Ha, Fin. Like the fish :) This was an amazing story, and you are an absolutely great author. Holla!

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Whoa. Creepy and Awesome in a slightly twisted way.

Ooooh, very nice! Wonderfully written and chillingly pretty. You did a really good job getting into this guy's head.

Just gorgeous. You do such a nice job getting into Scabior's head! This works well as a one shot for me (and usually I like more length) - the repetition of sunlight and flowers, Scabior's yearning. Especially the end, where we readers can see the path toward the canon trip to Malfoy manor or a non-canon trip to Scabior's dreams (and suspect that it will be the former - somehow Scabior is meant to be always hunting, not satisfied).

I liked this a lot, the writing is very good and this pair definitely intrigues me