This was cute

That's it! That was all of it! No! I want moreeee!

Oh my gosh. I've been looking and searching and hoping for a Goku/Vegeta fic as good as this. I loved this fic, from concept to execution. Thank you for writing it!

Beautiful. I love how you portray Vegeta's PTSD.

Great fix! So awesomely made and love the story!

And to the person named 'huh' why'd you read this if you don't like yaoi? I mean the warning was in the summary

I really liked it! Are you gonna do a sequel to this story? Also I wanted to read the unedited version of the lemon...can you mail bme a link to that? Thanks a bunch and great work!

FFFFFFFFFFFFF that was so cuuuuttteee! And really well written for a DBZ fic! I'm very impressed. And I wish there was more . It feels unfinished!

-DxH

The way you write GxV always makes me want to read more, more, more.

I really hope you'll write more for DBZ, since I can never stop reading until I'm either done, or fall asleep on the keyboard.

Brilliant.

Ewwwwgrosss and dumb

Vegeta is not gay

great fic.. write more soon :)

nice story

Awww...was that the end? ~_~ Sad times. I really liked that. You should totally write more DBZ. You've got a great grasp of Goku and Vegeta, your versions of their interactions and mannerisms and stuff are some of the most believable I've seen. Rock on!

Awesome chapter, I really liked the show of Vegeta's character, it looks extremely good! I can't wait to see more.

Very, very good so far, I'm eager to read more. :)

After I realized this was GxV I almost backclicked, but I decided to give you the benefit of a doubt, and I'm glad I did. You write really, really well, it's not very often I can read something and in my head see how it would play out as an episode.

Also, I'm glad Vegeta didn't cut his hair. Because really? That was a big steaming pile of no. And that moustache? Etch...

Anyway, good read so far, looking forward to the next chapter. :)