so sweet and funny! please ad more to this! love it!

i loved this story so much the way you wrote it and the way you portraied England was anazing it just totally and completely enchansed me into it :)

Francis as an aristocratic prude is totally how I see him. England is best as a punk and not a gentleman :D
I really, really like this story. The general feeling of it is just wonderful, and I love how you write the mood and the feelings. I wouldn't have anything against another chapter, though. Good job!

Love the way you wrote Francis.

Fabulous, hahh(:

Arthur as well...~

You captured their relationship well here... The spur-of-the-moment, IReallyHateYouButThat'sWhyILoveYou deal. :'D

-love-

Romantic!Prudish!Francis is so legit...and of course Punk!Arthur is his perfect counterpart! So of course this worked out great. :D

I like the 'verse you created here! The story was very well written and descriptive, and I liked Francis being prudish as opposed to Authur-it's a refreshing change. :)

That was awesome.

Arthur reminded me of myself too much, except I could never dance in front of others.

Great story, perfect portrayal of the two.

I don't really like prude England, punk England is so much more interesting.

Thanks!

I enjoyed the idea of them meeting like this.

It was an interesting take, on both of them actually. Their feelings/points of view actually came together nicely (in a strange way), or so it seems to me.

Baww I thought it was lovely~ Definitely an interesting take on their characters. Heehee Francis being a prude seems like it would be a sign of the apocalypse.

*snorts* Franny as a nickname for France... That made me laugh cause I have a friend we call Franny, but she's exact opposite of France, completely innocent. I had to explain 69 and that's what she said to her. XD And just about every sex joke she hears must also be explained. Loving the prudeish France, you would think it wouldn't work but you pull it off.

I liked this a lot! :D I love how they constantly feel attracted to each other, no matter what.

Lovely piece of fiction!

Awww cute

daww. the ending was so sweet~

You've done it again with your awesome FrUk one-shot! I just love the way you captivate their emotions and actions in this one-shot!

Great job as always and keep up the good job! D

"What do you really want?" he asks in irritation. "A quick shag?"

Francis blinks, truly shocked. "Do I look like that sort of person?" he asks in horror.

The man looks him up and down and smirks. "Yes," he replies, motioning to the bartender for another drink.

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That part right there, it entertained me to no end! For reason. I really enjoyed this.