I love this story! It's so cute and progressive. And I love how everyone's in it!

wow really well written a very creative way to tell the stories!

beautiful story!

:D

Hehe, this was great! I really liked the one for Blue! Always been waiting for Kensi to punch Deeks, lol. Brilliant!

Loved it!

It's so sweet and they are so cute! :)

Loved the part where Kensi puches Deeks! And loved this one: "As the nurse places his daughter in his arms, Callen thinks his family is finally complete, which is good, because Kensi said if he wanted any more kids he has to have them." It really sounds like something Kensi would say! :)

Keep writing!

Awwwwww.

I gotta say it - this was my favorite line, probably: "I like it green, it reminds me of that other G I like." Or at least, one of them.

Great job! Maybe a little less commas and more periods, but besides that, everything's awesome. I like how the colors are the different stages in their relationships. And, seeing as purple is my favorite color, I love that part. (Well, no, I actually love it because it's funny yet all too sweet, but whatever).

Again, great job!