LOVED IT its just so sweet but doesnt allen have SILVER/GRAY eyes not BLUE

DAWWW so cute owo

not bad being German and all XD and if you're looking for an English beta'er then I'd be happy to fill those shoes w

Such an adorable little fic. Lavi and all his impatientness (which totally isn't a word .) waiting for Allen to come back and Alen in all of his childish stupdity missing the train and saying happy birthday late XD they're just so cute XD

great job~

~Evelynn

That was really good! It was cute and short and I loved it to bits. I also thought it was really well written, you shouldn't put your work down. I can't wait to see more of your work later on.

I'm shocked though, english isn't your first language? You have better grammar and spelling than most people do!

This was really sweet, I have to say. Yaoi is not realy my cup of tea, but I did enjoy reading this. Good job!

hey :)

hättest dir keine sorgen machen müssen, dein englisch ist einwandfrei :D

mir gefällt die story sehr, die idee mit dem zettel war total süß :3

liebe grüße :)

~Lunatic

030 so cute

your grammar is actually better than some american writers i know (ugh...we are a society that watches too much tv and doesnt read enough)

cute story. wouldnt mind if you continued this either

Sweet darling. Very sweet. Nice job done! :D