KUDOS! You did a fantastic job of writing and storytelling. And I think its amazing that you stuck with it and completed this long story. So many fanfiction writers are not able to do that!

Just wish Athrun could have walked in the door at the end!

I doubted this. And I regretted it. This is an amazing piece of work, it’s got me hooked since the beginning and I’ve read through part one in one sitting (basically spent my entire day on this) and it is worth it.
I really like how although sometimes the characters are OOC, the plot is similar with the canon one, (with the same events happening,) there are many different variations and they are all written so well.

Jesus F Christ. What a hell of a ride.

No wonder this thing was so highly recommend on so many blogs and TV Tropes.

I have been following this story since... I don't know, it's been years. This story is a glorious epic and it is without a doubt one of the best things I have ever read in my life. You know you have found a real diamond in the rough when certain scenes and quotes from a story just stick with you for years and years, and you find yourself remembering them and analyzing them at the randomest times. Yzak's death, Murre's fall seen through Cagalli's perspective, Andrew Watfeldt's death (and I don't even like the dude), Athrun helping Cagalli's as she was about to burn in the atmosphere, pretty much all the Asta scenes... and that's just some of them. You have created a masterpiece, and it was a sheer joy to be able to read it, especially in a fandom like Gundam Seed, where complex plot, good characterization/character development, and skilled writing is as hard to come by as a sane Blue Cosmos.

Even your OCs were interesting. Asta is one complex character, and I thought her backstory was handled brilliantly. Tragic and interesting without being clichéd or Mary Sue-ish.

The politics, the darkness you explored in this story... It is just phenomenal. What a treat it was to read. This is the Cagalli's I have always wanted to see. This is what Gundam Seed could have been. Thank you. I actually feel like I need to give something back, idk. Do you have a Patreon account? I will at least donate the cost of a latte.

I can't believe it's finally over. I hardly even know what I feel (a mix of a ton of things all at once, really), but I am definitely intrigued by the promise of a possible sequel. I can't wait to see what other works you produce.

Please do write a sequel! I love your characterization of Cagalli!

Ah.. *sobs* one more thing *sobs* don't makes Athrun died without knowing he has baby! T_T Please don't to mean to Athrun *sobs

I hate the ending! T_T
please make the sequel.. please make Athrun alive again like you make on Murruer... like Mu, Andy, and Kira also in canon.. please.. please.. please..
you must BEGINS AGAIN _ don't make me disappoint to continue and finish your story T_T

omg! Cagalli's pregnant!? YAYYY! I like Cagalli became pregnant! (Cagalli: you like I'm suffers!? *SEED mode on*
Me: eumh... of course no.. *ran*)

I hope Cagalli pregnant! I really like when She's got pregnant 0

Cagalli made a movement first! again! so different from canon hihihi
Finally! Athrun's eyes green!D
Caridad's eyes green? she really looks like Athrun..

"My most beloved mistakes"? what's it? what's that mean?
you mean with Athrun? or they make out in the hangar? or more?

YAAY! Cagalli's confessions! And the KISS! She's really such an aggressive boyfriend *cough* I mean girlfriend LOL and she is dominant kkkkk
And again.. Athrun's eyes is green not blue...

you make this story was to make Cagalli in Kira's position but I think her attitude not like Kira nor Cagalli herself.. she seems like Athrun?
and you know I'm biased in Cagalli but I think I don't like her in this story.. I prefer to Athrun...

You know .. sometimes.. ah not sometimes but many times I want read from Athrun's pov.. I want to know what's in Athrun's mind..
I'm also glad that you not made 'B' scenes between Cagalli and Tolle like Kira and Flay in GS canon.. if you made it I'm afraid I'll get heart attack LOL

Btw why you not made Cagalli wear that miniskirt! pink miniskirt _ I hope you will make Cagalli wear itD

I'll not say anything.. I just wanna say 'I like this chapter !' finallybtw, I don't know if you make a typo or what.. but Athrun's eyes were green not blue.. his hair was blue