Reviews for Bella's Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well done but sad story but the thing you do when you see no way out. Cant help but feel bad for Bella and several authors here has made her a very interesting char. |
![]() ![]() this is really good and really sad. you should write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Helen. You can relax now. I spotted... ZERO errors here. I'm so proud of you and your first Potter fic. _ Rigel is a great name now that I see it here, good choice. Anyway, I just love seeing humanity in Bellatrix- the pity she feels for her nephew and the grief for her own child... It's just a oneshot, though? I think it works that way but it would be interesting to see what happens if/when The Dark Lord finds out about baby. Especially if the killing curse can be traced back to Bella. I love it, regardless, Helen. ILY. |