I know that maybe you wont read this, maybe something happen that you abandon this plataform 6 years ago, i only hope that youre alive and be happy with your life.

I want to tell you that thanks, thanks for write these wonderfuls stories, I read Hill of Swords too and you just are a greater writer, you put Cliche animes how Zero no Tsukaima and Sekirei and make them master pieces in combination with the Nasuverse

Thanks, thanks for let me read this marvelous stories, this and Hill of Swords full my life with joy, with sadness, with much emotions that now a sentiment of emptiness is growing in me, knowing that you maybe never I have the chance of reading any of your stories anymore.
The Nasuverse is alive, even if had pass a decade and half, stories of the Fate universe will continue even another decade, and is hard to know that maybe you wont see all this journey, that you cant se the repercussion of your stories, how you inspire many other writers to share their stories with the rest of the world, to see your legacy.

Really dude, thanks, thanks for everything, thanks for letting us read your history, for the journey of emotions that you make us pass, i have these stories in my heart, i will remember how a fanfiction upgrade the quality of a story, making something so cliche in a masterpeace. I really wish you a good life, you deserve it.

Damn. What a ride. Honestly suck a great fic. Haven’t had such an enjoyable read in a while. I hope your doing great, wherever you are man. Rest in peace brother.

OK I have read this for a month now and I am so happy that I found this
I have read many good stories but this was something else and will have it in my mind for a long time to come

also Thanks for making it

Thank you for this story ️

So this is full retelling of the original story, without any actual butterfly effects, with few small changes here and there. Even your hero behaves like the original protag - totally inexperienced virgin, despite this one having YEARS of experience in stable relationship with two girls. And apparently you see nothing wrong with this kind of ridiculous bullshit.

Eh, I guess you just liked the original story so much, that you wanted to retell it. Still, this is hardly a "fanfiction", when it's so close to original.

Loved it
Hated it
Confused by it
Loved it more

I was really skeptical about the people who seemed to gush over this story and GB in general coming into reading this. It seemed like everyone who mentioned it had nothing but good things to say, and well, that usually sets of warning bells for me. Well, I'll admit, they weren't wrong. It came to a conclusion really quickly, but it wrapped up nicely, and overall I loved the story. Just wish I could have gotten a bit more of karasuba. Really like her for some reason... Thank you for your writing, even if you have long since moved on with your life, you have made something that many thousands of people have enjoyed. Thank you.

Absolutely smashing. A riotous romp from beginning to end that I never tired of reading, even with the occasional grammatical error or trope thrown in. Congratulations on a great finale and I hope you continue to write whenever the muse strikes you.

ok, this has been bothering me for a while now. It seems like in every fic, people write Shirou to be completely ok with receiving physical abuse. Yes, Shirou has jacked priorities, but just taking hits for the hell of it? It is honestly infuriating to read and a terribly unhealthy message to send.

To be fair this is not that bad, but this has some major flaws. Like for example, shirou's powers being horrendously wrong or his personality being finicky.

Well shit. That was good.

Shirous a dumbass for keeping his magic a secret

Shirou's mother is a scientist from the organization that he is not harbouring such good feelings and he still don't want her to explain anything about her good acts under this benevolent organization? Or didn't even suspects a little about it? After all of that heated talk with Miya about all of this nonsense?

Shirou is blind? He saw the weapons of the enemy Sekirei and didn't registered anything into his reality marble? Why he doesn't use? He can't? He can use Kanshou and Bakuya but can't register his enemies weapons, histories or even their skills?

Why didn't Shirou made a structural grasp on her sword? Or the other wind sekirei's scythe? One of the most advantages he has so far is knowing various things from fighting style to history of the enemy and he didn't use?