You still alive there buddy? Was wondering about an update if you're not alive then you just keep on keeping on

why couldn't sakura be trained from somone else you people always do tsunade why not anko or the ambu girl with purple hair on kiba teacher can't spell her name tbh it's annoying why doesn't she have a different teacher

Is this story just going to be leading to Naruto dying by getting the Kyubi sucked out of him since he doesn't have the Kyubi training or sage mode?

U hope you continue the story

Hahaha… didn't really expect that about kurumi and naruto. Keep it up

I freaking love it please please please continue this!

Around the middle of the fic, instead of saying "there will be consequences." You put "there will be consciousness." Which is R a REALLY BIG difference. Any way keep up the good work.

It's always so sad when a good story dies

Here's how to improve. Listen to the readers. Don't say you are going to do your story your way then ask the readers what bad and good. Especially when you know. Your OC's fucking suck. Not because they were written badly, which they were, but because it took away from Tsunade and Naruto interacting more. And see the difference between the amount of views of your first story and this one? It's because you are being a jackass. Don't share your material with the site if you aren't going to try and accommodate your readers. You should rewrite your first story without ANY OCs, because most of them fucking suck no matter the fic, and focus on the relationship between Naruto and Tsunade as mother and son. But you won't listen to me. It's too bad I enjoyed your first story til the overly smart daughter and her dumb ass father. If you don't want to rewrite kill them off and have the Godaime Homage not care. That last piece of advice sucks but you get my point

lol tsunade has underestimated minato's son (seals) and jiraiya's 'apprentice' (um ero-ness)

lol the akatsuki ran into the jinchuuriki of the kyuubi and didn't even realize and the lead him out the desert and then left to his own devices XXD

Shame you stopped writing this.

love this story cant wait for new chapters

You're right, it isn't a Haku/Naruto romance. There isn't much romance between them, it is like they skipped that part entirely and went straight to the meat of their relationship.

Is good.