This is so good! Made me cry!

OMG!

I cant believe this only has 3 reviews!

It deserves hundreds!

I loved it, and I am ashamed to say...it made me cry a lil bit...then again i was listening to a very sad song at the time...

:D

ohhhmg! I just read this on my phone in class and it almost made me tear up! It was so raw and real, beautiful. I reallyy like how you did larten's reaction to kurda. I can see how he was acting overly dramatic in a way but I can tell he was being dead serious with what he said. I love it! A sequel would be amazing.

*Roxxy,

That was so sad :( I liked that Kurda made a little appearance, that was a unique touch. More? :D

That was really sad, but really good :) I think you managed to keep them very in character too :) Well done! More maybe? :D