WHY OH WHY YOU NEVER FINISHED IT

I just found this.
Oh, I wish you would update this! I know it's been awhile but this story is so refreshing and stimulating.
I love the unique beginning you have so far. The plot is very original and I am all in all loving the Sarah and Jareth chemistry. Im excited to see how she gets on in the underground. And how jareth reacts to her.
Please pick this up again someday. Im sure anything you write next will be amazing.

Please, Please update ;)

While this hasn't been updated in years, this still remains one of my favorite Labyrinth stories :)

This is utterly fabulous, why did you stop?!

Exceptional writing. I do hope that you continue.

Ahhhh. Love the little jabs you threw in there! Mick Jagger fetish? Lovely interaction between them and I'm so sorry this has been abandoned or is it simply a long delay in chapters? Can't fault you for that. I've got 2 stories waiting for final chapters that are mounting into the years as well. Heck, I can't fault you if it's been abandoned either! This is fan fic and I enjoyed what you have written anyway. Do you have any original work published?

Please please PLEASE pick this back up again. I love this story. I adore the characterization and the premise of how Sarah and Jareth met. Great work. )

Sarah really got to shine in this chapter and I absolutely loved the banter between her and the Goblin King.

Oh my goodness the banter in this is absolutely glorious. It's exactly the kind of thing I wish I could write and I'm weeping with envy.

Interest start with different approach, it has a potential you should continue it.

Awesome start to your story. I am really looking forward to more, please please please!

Nice opening, always good to have one where they're strangers makes it less cliched :)

This is a fascinating beginning! I hope you intend to continue it at some point.

This is so lovely! I hope you will finish it. You're off to such a good start, it would be a shame to abandon it!