lol astrid smirking at her husband hiccup haddock as usual i have to take control

i really thoroughly enjoyed this. I wish this was in the movie ;b

Please finish

This was such a great fic! The "talk" was so awkward with Snotlout, Spitelout and Gobber there. The letter was beautifully written, and just generally you immersed me into the story as if I were actually there. I hope you finish it wether it is M rated or not. Well done!

you should finish this just cuz I want to see what Hiccup and Astrid do with the pain that she has to go through it being her first time and all. Update please

Whether you finish it or not, this was a great story, I really enjoyed it and it had great characterization. I can totally see all of this happening, it was so perfect! A wonderful little peek into their wedding day.

Very original take on Hiccup and Astrid's wedding day and night. Everyone was so IC and I could feel the awkward during the "talk." Snotlout would totally act like that and Gobber was perfect for the little bit we saw of him.

Not only was this original, well-written and believable, but you proved you don't need "saucy parts" to make a great wedding fic. Keep it as is because the ending is perfect!

This was really good. The letter was adorable. Ha ha, Hiccup got so drunk. Poor guy.

Pleaaaaaaaase! Do finish it! 'M' all the way! :D

CAN'T EVEN -

yeeees. finish it.

hahahaha.

this was really good! gosh, I love how you write. you're such a good author!

You should totally write an M rated ending! It would awesome! 8D

go for it!

Yes please.

So Hiccup can't handle his ale.

Shocker.

(:

But willing to throw away tradition when needed.

Nice chapter

LFTM

Ja ne

Jim

NOOOOOOOO-ooookay! :P