awesome it was wonderful i absolutely posetively loved it you have great taste :) :D perfection great taste you

This is a really good 1827! Great job!

i like your fic XD

I liked this fan fiction? But did you get this idea from a doujinshi of them? Because I feel like I've seen the dialogue somewhere...

this was like the last part of Sunset Speeder by Electrocks [a doujin] :D But good work!

I usually don't read 1827 but this was really cute :3

Wow I am amazed this is your first fanfic...It's awesome and sweet :3 Good job

Hahaha! this reminds me of Sunset speeder. Great job for your first fanfic though it was too short but its okay. Hibari is a bit... OOC but I guess we can't just tell since he is a mysterious person, anyway. (Besides Fanfic verse Hibari is far more different from the canon verse.)

I enjoyed this.

Hey, I think I've seen some of this lines before. Is it from Sunset Speeder? I'm curious.:)

Awww~ That's cute. Good job!

Mindless fluff, indeed. Woah, Hibari's really fearless, even with fingers about to stab his eyes. XD And the dialogue... Based off a doujinshi?

So cute... 1827 really is the best... And, did you get the idea from the 1827 doujinshi Sunset Speeder? Well some lines are the same from the doujinshi and I can't help but wonder.

WTH! DUDE! THIS IS SO GAY! GAY! GAY! GAY! TSUNA AND HIBARI ARE BOTH DUDES! AND HIBARI'S MY IDOL! HE'LL BITE YOU TO DEATH (but since he's not real) I'LL BITE YOU TO DEATH! I UNDERSTAND THAT THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFIC BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN THAT YOU SHOULD MAKE A *GAY* ONE!