I love this dream sequence! Particularly the almost fairytale-esque exchange between Al's offer's and Rachel's refusals. Beautifully put together :D

Could you plz do a sequel? Plllllllzzzzzzzzzz?

Oh, so something Al would do. I'm a little surprised he hasn't tried to grab Rachel in her dreams yet. Only a matter of time, I'm sure... :p

Nice fic, I really enjoyed this, it was quite enchanting with the repetition of lines and it was a good flow to it, if you would describe it that way. Very well done, I wouldnt put that past Al, lol.

Ooo,interesting.

Looking forward to reading your other stories.

Yep, Awesome.

oooooooooooooh i like the story ! love it actually

always with the cake with Al :D

Interesting dream, and interesting language you used in her dreams. Mh... I had my problems reading and understanding it, since I'm only used to modern english. Al on a horse, I almost thought it could have been an elf with the shoes and the horse. Well the question about "I almost had you" is one I ask as well. What does he mean with it. Would he have jumped in at sun-down to pick up his dreaming witch... or was there something magical demonlike waiting for her?

Ooh, fun and creepy at the same time! glad to see you're back posting again. :) One weird spot: did you mean cloven hoof instead of heel?

I love one-shots too. I especially love ending on a cliffhanger and leaving the rest up to the reader's imagination. ;)