Reviews for Desperation
sinakakrasa chapter 4 . 12/1/2016
Wow, i think you portrayed their relationship/ feelings perfectly. They werent out of character and the way you described the fear, etc was superb. 10/10 would hope for a continuation
Mattychan69 chapter 4 . 9/18/2015
kkkkkkkeeeeepppppp ggggooooooooooiiiiiiinnnggg! UPDATE!
Shana-Fujioka chapter 4 . 1/19/2015
Is this story ever going to continue? Because it does sound interesting. :)
illuminootie chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
REALLY YOU END IT RIGHT THERE, RIGHT THERE WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! I WAS GETTING INTO THIS AND YOU DO THAT TO ME! -grumbles- Stupid story stupid me. Please update for all of us drooling fan girls.
Pleasing.the.Yaoi.Gods chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
Nice, hate sex when really they liked each other. I can tell. I hope you write more, I anticipate it!
amaya-nights rain chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
:3 awesome sauce

xD sorry fail review is fail
anon azure chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
please update soon KYAA~~!
Sai Kaitou X chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
Sexy~

I love me some sadism.

Hope to see more from you soon. Keep up the good work!
AccioTeaAndCats chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
I love how you portray them both :D Ooh a look of desperation?

I cant wait :D

Lovin this! _
Naitomeaberu chapter 3 . 12/25/2010
wow! It's a simple story and easy to understand, but has enough details to make it interesting. There isn't any complex vocabulary words wither. I compliment you for your work, not many can pull this feat off. Keep up the good work and update soon.
xRandomosityx chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
hot damn. more please.
Ovia chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
This story is getting more interesting ... Please update soon! I love the way of your writing :3 ... Can't wait to see Izaya's desperate face :3
ladyMunakata88 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
OMG! *_* I just found this story, I read it all at once and I think it's simply wonderful! *O* The characters are perfectly IC and the plot is really interesting. I was sure Shizuo wouldn't have killed Izaya, although he's his mortal enemy and I really like the way he decided to punish him now ihihihhi!XDXD Something tells me that Izaya will like a lot what is going to happen and me too of course *รง* Please update soon, I want to read more *O*
Pleasing.the.Yaoi.Gods chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Squee! That was hot! Not gonna lie, hate turning to lust, great job with the transition is was believable. I anticipate the next chapter.
H2302 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
YESS! Honestly, when I started reading this fic, I got scared, because the prompt was good, but alot of the stories on here have been a little... fast moving... But yours is like BAAM! perfect. You totally got shizuo down, because I doubt Shizuo would ever kill someone, in the anime or in the manga. And Izaya is human, so obviously when he's pushed to the extent, he'll emit some fear.

AAANYYWAAAY, I think i'm in love with you.
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