Reviews for Desperation |
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sinakakrasa chapter 4 . 12/1/2016 Wow, i think you portrayed their relationship/ feelings perfectly. They werent out of character and the way you described the fear, etc was superb. 10/10 would hope for a continuation |
Mattychan69 chapter 4 . 9/18/2015 kkkkkkkeeeeepppppp ggggooooooooooiiiiiiinnnggg! UPDATE! |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 4 . 1/19/2015 Is this story ever going to continue? Because it does sound interesting. :) |
illuminootie chapter 4 . 3/29/2012 REALLY YOU END IT RIGHT THERE, RIGHT THERE WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! I WAS GETTING INTO THIS AND YOU DO THAT TO ME! -grumbles- Stupid story stupid me. Please update for all of us drooling fan girls. |
Pleasing.the.Yaoi.Gods chapter 4 . 1/16/2011 Nice, hate sex when really they liked each other. I can tell. I hope you write more, I anticipate it! |
amaya-nights rain chapter 4 . 1/16/2011 :3 awesome sauce xD sorry fail review is fail |
anon azure chapter 4 . 1/16/2011 please update soon KYAA~~! |
Sai Kaitou X chapter 4 . 1/16/2011 Sexy~ I love me some sadism. Hope to see more from you soon. Keep up the good work! |
AccioTeaAndCats chapter 3 . 12/31/2010 I love how you portray them both :D Ooh a look of desperation? I cant wait :D Lovin this! _ |
Naitomeaberu chapter 3 . 12/25/2010 wow! It's a simple story and easy to understand, but has enough details to make it interesting. There isn't any complex vocabulary words wither. I compliment you for your work, not many can pull this feat off. Keep up the good work and update soon. |
xRandomosityx chapter 3 . 12/23/2010 hot damn. more please. |
Ovia chapter 3 . 12/22/2010 This story is getting more interesting ... Please update soon! I love the way of your writing :3 ... Can't wait to see Izaya's desperate face :3 |
ladyMunakata88 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010 OMG! *_* I just found this story, I read it all at once and I think it's simply wonderful! *O* The characters are perfectly IC and the plot is really interesting. I was sure Shizuo wouldn't have killed Izaya, although he's his mortal enemy and I really like the way he decided to punish him now ihihihhi!XDXD Something tells me that Izaya will like a lot what is going to happen and me too of course *รง* Please update soon, I want to read more *O* |
Pleasing.the.Yaoi.Gods chapter 3 . 12/22/2010 Squee! That was hot! Not gonna lie, hate turning to lust, great job with the transition is was believable. I anticipate the next chapter. |
H2302 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010 YESS! Honestly, when I started reading this fic, I got scared, because the prompt was good, but alot of the stories on here have been a little... fast moving... But yours is like BAAM! perfect. You totally got shizuo down, because I doubt Shizuo would ever kill someone, in the anime or in the manga. And Izaya is human, so obviously when he's pushed to the extent, he'll emit some fear. AAANYYWAAAY, I think i'm in love with you. |