Paula is the woman's sister isn't it? It almost seems like it... jeez Murdoc you've done it again. You've driven a woman mad to the point she'll murder you. I love the italics at teh beginning, that's what caught my attention... kinda makes me wonder if he was in a hospital or something or if the woman that's after him got to him. I don't know, that's the impression I get as I reread this again. I love the beginning though, great start. I can't wait to see what'll happen next.