Oh this is so good! I like it a lot! Always hard to get use to new names but it is fitting for Dark Link. Do hope you continue the story I look forward to more!

Very beautiful and heartbreaking too. Sad to see that he would leave but great to know he will be okay. Sooooo good love it!

You really have good stories I am seriously enjoying this already!

I want more plz I think it would be a awesome story and I hope link and dark link do it sometime later on when they find eachother

Keep going! Dx I hope they find each other n link doesn't die xT

Can you please make this in to like a short story or something because it...just...ends. Right there. Dang. I think that this is a good story idea and I really hope to be able to read more of a story along the same lines or maby a continuation of this story? Please? Any way. Great one shot. Thanks for sharing! :)

this is such a good story i am still sad its a oneshot stilll amaizing story though

"Me I stole it from one of those lizard thingies which I forget the name of."

Lizalfos, I believe. Dunno if you knew that or not.

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Awesome! Prety decent detail, and I did catch some errors. Despite that, I was definitely into it. The mood and the story line were good. Though at some parts, I do admit that it was a bit confusing.

their right you know this can't stay a one shot. it's got something going for it and you gotta keep it going. a few minor things here and there and you might need to fix the bottom part a bit but otherwise a good more then oneshot. you better add to this otherwise your going to get eaten :P

good luck and i'm glade you back XD

If it makes sense:

I hate you sooo much but I love you! HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME WAIT SO LONG! IT SOOO GOOOD!IT CAN'T STAY A ONE-SHOT! IT CAN'T! WELL WRITEN AND PERFECT!

LOVE AND HATE!