For future reference; Steve is older than Chin, not the other way around.

Its really good but there are a spelling mistake toward the ending... jsut a heads up but i did like it

Ho, man. Okay. I see that you finished this about five years ago (lol) but I still wanted to comment because
A) This is the best Five-0 fic I've read so far.
B) The characters were so close to their TV counterparts that I actually did have to remind myself more than once that this was a fanfiction.
C) I loved every 80's reference. Especially the A-Team thing. It was my favorite. XD I used to love that show. McGarret being Murdock cracked me up, with the "reasoning" behind it.
So, yeah! Great fic, hope you're still writing!

Wonderful story! I love that you gave no easy fix! It was real and heartwarming! Thank you for sharing!

Cool.

Love Danny whump. It seemed like they were takin g turn getting hurt.

Hii !
I just want to say that this fic is amazing! The way it is written and everything falls in place with everything! Iloved It !

Lol best Five-O stoy ever! :)

I get it now, you love Daany and Steve whump :p

Loved it

Wow awesome story. Totally adorable.

Loved it:)

McGarrett as Murdock?

ON THE MARK!

As are the rest.

Did Steve ever get that hug from Danno?

wonderful story! Tocuhing, funny, heartwarming and so damn amazing. Loved it!

I kinda did this backwards I read the sequel first and then this one but... I enjoyed them both! I espeacially loved the bickering between Danny and Steve! And I must admit I think the A-team comparison was spot on! ;) Thanks for the wonderful reads!

I really enjoyed reading this story - all the whumping and angst, Danny's rants, the whole crew each getting in some time. You did a great job of balancing the humor with the drama with the action.