I love it but...why wasn't Haruhi there?

OH NO!Kitsune!

A HA!Kitsune is the yakuza's daughter!

It was ... AWESOME! The whole plot is AMAZING! I love how you actually made it realistic instead of like a shojo powered manga girl. :)

Aww, that was so touching at the end when they all hugged each other. Kitsune/Kira needs it after all of the horrible things done to her in the past. I absolutely loved your story!

-Failure-chan

And by the way, the face made at the end of the chapters made me think of a happy Itachi from Naruto. XP

Ohmehgawd. Just sat down an read the entire thing... I think my eyes are going to roll out of my head...

I loved it though :) Wish I could have read it more thoroughly, but my eyes started twitching by the fifth chapter xD

Love you, Honey! Be sure to actually start WRITING in your other books though, cause you know that I don't go on Fanfiction that often :)

AWWWW!So sad! I almost cried :'( (almost). it was such a good story! So much tension... I loved it!

Great Story! :D

Amazing story! You have a true talent for writing storys! It's also very creative. Rearly do I ever see a story with a different plot or even ending that is written so well. Well done!

This was probably one of the best written fics in this fandom. I liked it and if I didn't review before was because dummy me didn't have an account (so now I'm reviewing all fics I've read.) )

I love this story so much! xD It's very well written, has a good plot, and it's just very awesome!

I like the story it is very good. You did a great job on just wonderful! _

It was OK but still has something to be desired. I'm not sure what, but maybe more of an involement on the twins behalf or the rest of the host club for that matter. But for the most it was great!

that was awesome! loved the tension but i think you could have dragged it out longer

this was an awesome ending! although kind of dark...but really good. and I'm also really really sad that this ended...but I look forward to seeing more from you!