Posted 12 August 2014, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents.

Some of the work I read is what I consider worthy of a professional. These are marked as Picks of the Week. While they are posted on Starwarsknights I am adding the best of the week where applicable.

Post TSL: Having put the idea of being a Jedi hopeful behind her, Mira finds it isn't that easy

Technical note: Remember that they didn't have a hyperspace motivator small enough to fit inside a fighter until over 4,000 years later, so having her travel from Nar Shaddaa to Kashyyk is not logical without a mother ship.

The situation is dire, and finding herself among the Wookie a bit of a nightmare for her, since she is judging the entire species by the way Hanharr acted. It doesn't help that the first one she meets on planet punched her out.

I found myself wanting to click the next chapter, but do not have time to follow it along. My primary negative is the idea that to Mira a few weeks would seem like years, concerning Kreia's prediction of her death.

Pick of the Week

Liked the idea. I always liked this pairing but there are few stories with it...

Just a minor detail/correction:

"...he was leaving for the Unknown reasons. ..."

reasons should be regions right?

Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Good beggining. I look forward to the next chapter

It's rare that one finds a story with Mira as well written as she is here! Believe me, I've tried writing her but I can never seem to fully grasp her character. Also, the little snippet she caught of Visas and the Exile was written nicely. Continue?

The exchange between Visas and the Exile, very touching.