Reviews for The Crossroad at Black Heart Lane
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20
FFS PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY THIS IS THE BEST FEAR FANFIC EVER AND THE ONLY FULL FLEDGED ALMA X BECKET FANFIC THATS A NOVELS LENGTH!
Vanitas50 chapter 9 . 6/3
*sigh*... rest in peace
Josh chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
I am not used to reviewing but i found parts of this to be hilarious and honestly i am glad you took an interest in writing a fan novel on this as i myself wanted a continuation of the remaining FEAR 2 charecters, well i thought this was good it felt a bit like a comedy with the alma rape part and the dialogue you put for her but yeah please continue this.
Prisila chapter 9 . 5/15/2018
Why did you not finish the history?
I like it
Earthly Entity chapter 9 . 1/1/2018
Is this story still alive or on hiatus?
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 2 . 9/25/2017
Maybe keep it focused on PFC Bucket's pov.
ThedemonlordPingu chapter 9 . 7/25/2017
It is a shame that this story hasn't been continued. It has such great potential.
I hope you return to continue this.
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 9 . 4/11/2017
Are you going to continue?
Guest chapter 9 . 4/11/2017
Well, has this been abandoned?
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 4 . 4/10/2017
Yes, reviews are like cookies for the author. He/she requires them for energy and sustenance for their story, generally.

Now, hopefully you haven't abandoned this story, and hopefully these reviews are motivation enough.
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 3 . 4/10/2017
Story is alright so far. I would suggest reading aloud your chapters and this would catch most errors which Microsoft office won't pick up.

One such error: He confined in her-change to- He confided in her.
version15 chapter 9 . 3/31/2017
Shame there's no update.
DarkIceDragon21 chapter 8 . 2/10/2017
Awesome story so far.
DannyPhantom619 chapter 9 . 12/29/2016
Nice story too bad you haven't updated.

I vote Becket X Stokes&Alma...especially a threesome.
Bookfear chapter 9 . 11/19/2016
Also I think the guy is going to a chapel. Is that thing where you get more if you guess correct still on?
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