Can't believe you didn't finish this. This was ready to be my favourite G/V story out of all of them, but nope you didn't finish it. Why unfinished stories are so highly favourited I will never know

Dude, why doesn't Gohan just tell Videl the truth? This stupid hiding is doing nothing but creating artificial tension.

This is really OOC for Piccolo...no, I mean really. Like wow, you overdid it.

well, first of all, he called himself the deman king. and we know that who's that. noone but our good ol piccolo! then, Mr. satan's pov. you described the deman like he was green. and we know who the green bean is, dear ol piccolo! so that's was pretty obvious.

Hey in case you don't see it, just wanted to say I saw your work on the new update to plus one, and it was excellent. :)

Sorry I haven't reviewed! I haven't read this fanfic in sooooo long but I dusted off this ole classic and am giving it another read. It's fantastic once again! And a few new chapters since I have last read it. Although Vegeta is not a main character, I love his scenes here and there. You have him down well! Very interesting that you have introduced 17 into the mix.

are you a girl cause if you are iy would explain to me why yiu like undressing the son sayins

Just wanted to say I don't know when or if you'll continue this, ( though I truly hope you do ;) ) I hope you keep this story up here because I absolutely love it. :D I can't get enough of it, even just rereading these chapters brings me joy.

"If you youngsters want to go charging into battle without a plan, be my guest."
Goku: "Okay!"

This one slayed me XD

Must have more!

Moreee?

Mmm Kay. Kool.

Wish this story would have continued on, great writing and such a great read.

Gaaah I just love your writing style so much, and this fic has literally everything I could want.
Sooo...yeah you're pretty awesome. :)

Boy, wouldn't it just be he greatest if you elated this? I bet it would be! Or really, any if your stories. Yeah...it'd be great.