Reviews for Phineas' Biggest Idea Ever
phil-tyler-.42 chapter 14 . 5/31/2018
I loved this work, Ash. Your work is not just faithful to the characters, storytelling and feel of the series, you transcend them. I would like to say that I always get good concepts in my head with the heart of your stories.

No matter what, heart is a big inspiration that comes from any story. You use it a lot.
phil-tyler-.42 chapter 14 . 6/23/2017
This is basically one of your best fan fiction. It's artistic, unique, literary and even though it's problematic, I would call it great material for possible adaptation to television if you ever decide to give it a go, not to mention if the fan fiction series, Phineas and Ferb: Reinventing High School, is adapted for television. I also love your brilliant art, as well as your other fanfics: Sick Streak, Vocal Blues, your one-shots, and finally, the magnum opus, The Seer.
You make the characters more three-dimensional by creating beautiful backstories, increase the characterization of them, not to mention showing how loss could mean something both for the characters and for the audience.
KKVixen chapter 14 . 6/14/2017
I absolutely, positively, definitely, indefinitely, completely, and totally loved this story. Man, I haven't said that in a long time.
KKVixen chapter 12 . 6/14/2017
I've got to say that little Phineas is positively adorable.
SPEECHLESS chapter 14 . 9/27/2016
Oh my word. This is the most beautiful work I have ever been privileged enough to read. Well done. Just :wipes away a tear: Well done.
TrippAbrams chapter 5 . 2/24/2016
This is a really amazing story! It is basically number 1 on the list!
Brainless Genius chapter 14 . 2/17/2016
This is a really interesting way of depicting what Phineas would be like if he actually broke down for a significant period of time. Usually, we only see him angry or sad for a minute or two, so you did a good job of interpreting how it would be if it went on longer - and how others would react. Plus, the fireworks outside Ferb's window made me very happy. Nice work!
t.t.zoldy chapter 14 . 12/26/2015
I loved this story, so touching. I couldn't stop reading
TheButterflyComposer chapter 10 . 2/21/2015
Hmpf, so people thought Major Monogram was once a triangular red head with a wife and two kids (again) decided to fake his own death, grow a moustache and essentially become Nick Fury?

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Huh...that actualy sounds like something a comic book company would do.
TheButterflyComposer chapter 7 . 2/21/2015
Ah, will the wonders of this cartoon ever cease?
Having recently gone over the favourite episodes, I was suprised to find a smattering on fanfics on the subject.
As yours is (going off of it's placement), oneof the more popular ones, I shall start here.
I like your writing, the fact Ferb talks more than once per day is fine (keep a tally and see if you can make him speak less than five sentences per chapter though).
It got a bit dark with all the hospitals and such but then again, they aren't preteens any more...
Still, moving on. Hope this continues to be good.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Dear Kicster:

"...and it was NOT easy." Would you think me a pompous old so-and-so if I observed that few things worth doing are? (And mastering the art of descriptive narration is surely one of those things.)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth
Animation Adventures chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
That looks like an awesome lunch hour. Wish I could have some like that! Phineas just never gives up on inventing even during school and that's great, it's good to have a little fun while getting an education. And Phineas still doesn't have a clue about Isabella's crush on him. XD
Animation Adventures chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
This is off to an awesome start! I can imagine Phineas and Ferb being like this in high school. It's cool how they are still inventing only now not everything goes unnoticed by their parents. Not to mention seeing your artwork of them as high school students helped out a lot imagining what they looked like. Love Phineas' hoodie and Ferb's bag, those two parts have to be my favorite parts of the brothers' teenage designs. Also, my congrats to Candace on getting engaged to Jeremy. Must read more!
erika.peki chapter 14 . 5/15/2014
PLEAAAASEE tell me this is not the end!
pikablue chapter 14 . 3/19/2014
OMG I love this story it's soo sweet!
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