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You know, I think your storytelling skill is far better than what I see here. It is brought down a bit by the erratic grammar and flow. I think it would be worthwhile to seek a good beta reader. Nevertheless it's good, so entirely up to your mood.

Also, no one is perfect so it's usually a good idea to look at your settings from an outsider's perspective to help discover flaws. For example the audience attitude I mentioned in my previous review.

What? Disgusting and NEET? Seriously, are these people retarded, or brain dead? NEET basically means someone not in employment, education or training. Keima is a student, so that's just plain retarded. Secondly, appearance wise he's decent, as the girl who likes cute things has made very clear numerous times. He's also known to be very intelligent.

The only reason other students don't approach him and avoid him is because they know he doesn't even acknowledge their existence.

The way you perceive their attitude is laughably inaccurate and makes no sense.

I thought it was the god of conquest

From Rin all the way to Miyo.
I have captured over a thousand girls.
Unknown to Bad Ends,
Nor to failure.

Sounds like a verse of Unlimited Capturing Work, lol.

As much as I love this fiction,the ending just ruined it for me. Since the beginning all signs hinted towards a Kanon ending but in the final few chapters the abruptly changes to a Elsie ending without much of development compared to Kanon. It might be because of bias but I hated the ending. It could've been executed better either with a Kanon ending or Elsie ending with proper development. I would still give this a sold 8.7 since for the most part the characters were developed well and the concept of having Keima work with the girls through out the year instead of the small sub-plot in the Manga and OVA in the Anime was really nice. I'm stupid though for thinking that you would read this even after the last chapter of ST was years ago. I still havemhopenthough

At this point, I am just going to accept that you are incredible. I finished all 91 chapters in one day, and it's totally, completely engaging. Although I found the climax of this story to be less than your usual standards... it's awesome regardless AND it's just part of a trilogy anyway.

It was a great read, I am glad I got to read this.

I hate that manipulative manager. How come the god himself isn't teaching her a lesson yet?

Yay! The Kanon ship is going full speed. So glad Keima said he likes her.

You know, I'd rather read Keima x Kanon chapter than the rather boring 2B pencils focused chapters. I couldn't care less about 2B pencils.

I wanted more Kanon and less 2B pencils... but oh well.

And Elsie Should NOT be a love interest. She's the sister figure... that's what her role in Keima's life is. Turing her into a love interest is not the way to go.

A great story, but I do have a few quips. Reading the summary, you expect a story where the girls Keima conquered regain their memories and there is drama regarding that premise and the story starts that way. Then you completely divert from that premise and go into a drama regarding music and bands. The Weiss, most of the other girls, and the important parts of the original story are completely ignored. Heck you even have his teacher dropping hints, some old girls confessing or getting interested, then throw it all away with a mind wipe. The story wasn't bad, but I found myself losing interest as every chapter I read, I kept thinking, "Is this the part where other girls who remembered come back? Is this the part where the memories and the premise of the original story play a role?" Also, while I realize some chapters may have not been released when you wrote your first chapter, important parts of the original story feel like an elephant in the room, like Tenri, the goddesses, vintage, etc.

In short, a good story, but I feel like it kind of deviates from the original story in terms of theme, especially given what I expected from your summary. Imagine if I wrote a story with a summary, "The goddesses and Keima have to deal with Satyr and the other girls are slowly regaining their memories" but then 80% of the story is a love triangle drama between Haqua and Elsee.

Damn this was a long one. And It was a good one. Thank you for all the effort you put into writing this story. Even if you finished this story three years ago.

Did you just use the aria for Unlimited Blade Works on dating sim heroines...

Great story and great original premise that I don't think I've seen anywhere else. Keep up the good work!

Me divertí mucho leyendo tu historia, gracias por escribir