Reviews for Tomfoolery
wickedly-popular chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Made me smile. )
AshleyInWriterland chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I pretty much want to second what ElianaMargalit said.

This was sweet :)
rainbowfish22 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I've decided that, yes, smiles are now a legitimate currency.

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Congratulations! You're now rich! :D And I loved this story.
elphieT chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Haha! I liked this one a lot :) Okay, it does need some work before it's perfect, but it was pretty darn cute. I liked that it was from Madame Morrible's pov (before and after it slides into Boq's), and I liked seeing how she's trying to chaperone her charge's courtship when she can.

If you were ever to revisit this one in the future, which I know you're trying to finish other fics and probably won't give this one a second glance, but if by some miracle you did, I would think about cutting Boq's pov and write it entirely from Morrible's. We know Boq's story. We know your different takes on Boq's story in the world of Bessa, but seeing Bessa through Morrible's eyes is very interesting, and you're certainly clever enough to pull it off well ;)