Reviews for When Subterfuge is Done |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I love the raw truth of it, even when I don't necessarily agree with your conclusions. Everything you write feels honest here. I totally agree with you about Canary's Song. They weren't ready to pursue anything, even though that's what the audience wanted. They had so much more character development to go through. Also, the poetry to begin each chapter is perfect, always fitting and always beautiful. Great writing. It's a shame to know I'll never see the end of this (which could hopefully, one day, be them together or at least the promise of just that). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooo! Why did u have to leave! Seriously come back and write more, things are getting interesting! Your writing is absolutely fantastic, specific detailed and specific. And if you think that u can't write character - you can! Trust me, you've got this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I feel the same... PLEASE FINISH THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been forever and a day since you wrote this... but... its one of my favorites. Any chance of you ever revisiting it? Please? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, this is wonderful and your writing is fantastic. I realize its been over a year since it has had any activity but, is there any chance of you revisiting this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come on, can't just leave there. Need more, have to find out what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cryed on that one too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww you're good! You really made me cry on this one! Sad, but beautifull. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() would you pls come back? finish your brilliant work? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked the chapter! You have a good read on the ins industry |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if I want Cal being able to ignore the fact that Gillian isn't around... unless it's to get the company on it's feet before he goes grovelling for her forgiveness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally had a chance to catch up on this fic - I love the direction you're taking it. Love that Cal bottomed up, but seems to be pulling up his bott straps now. Hopefully he stays that way lol, not gonna lie, the attractive blonde insurence lady had me going 'KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS MANWHORE!CAL'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Cal isn't wallowing in self pity and doin something! Hopefully Gillian contacts him soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad Cal is distracting himself in a productive way. Here's to hoping he doesn't distract himself with a skirt or two. :( |