Reviews for Our Little Secret
Guest chapter 18 . 8/6
Personally i prefwr akiza's rider suit as it is now also i feel girls will salivate to as kitana does nothing for me but does a lot for some of my female friends
Guest chapter 18 . 8/6
If jack made it without committing homicide it would be successful. I empathise strongly
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
So I read all of this, all the chapters and all I thought was ‘when will Yusei discombobulate a character.’ And ‘when does this become soft core porn’ or especially ‘wow everyone getting salty about things.’ I give it a 5/10, good writing and it’s passed well at times, though I feel some of the conflict felt forced
NewLooneyTune chapter 28 . 2/7
Hideo just being a normal father. He sees Yusei and Akiza sleeping together and of course he couldn’t help but to overreact.

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NewLooneyTune chapter 26 . 2/7
Akiza is right. Moving on is never easy, but it’s important to forgive including yourself. I’m proud that Yusei and Elise can be able to move past this problem and let the past be the past. Nice chapter

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NewLooneyTune chapter 25 . 2/7
How sweet. Luna has a crush

Wait a minute, Ellie? What is she doing here?

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NewLooneyTune chapter 20 . 2/5
Way to end things with Crow praying. It’s good to see him really want to work things out with Stephanie. I’m hoping for him

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NewLooneyTune chapter 14 . 2/5
I can’t believe Akiza is mad at Yusei for not telling her about Elise. This happened way before Yusei and Akiza even met
NewLooneyTune chapter 8 . 2/5
I’ve been waiting for Yusei and Akiza to be in the same bed together. Another great chapter

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NewLooneyTune chapter 5 . 2/4
I knew Akiza would win and it looks like the memory of her being a “witch” is finally behind her. Way to go, Akiza.

Excellent job on the duel battling. Gave me some ideas for a Yugioh fanfic. Stay tuned
NewLooneyTune chapter 3 . 2/4
Aww man. Things were about to get heated for a second there. If I’m being honest, I can’t picture Akiza being with Sayer as a couple. But that’s me.

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NewLooneyTune chapter 2 . 2/4
To answer your question, I like it. I really like this fanfic even if it’s just two chapters. But I get the feeling Jack, Crow, and Carly already suspected something is up between Yusei and Akiza. I guess I have to read and see for myself. Anyway, thumbs up on a job well done.

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Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
As a fan of Yugioh, I liked it a lot! Kinda wanted a longer one but OK!
FlareMagmar chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
I'm gonna try to put my thoughts in here

I liked a lot this fanfic for sure, as a person who watched the series (especially 5D's) I am very surprised because this is one of those rare gold-value fanfics out there, there is quite a lot i could say but to try to put it shortly, it's a great story, not only did you manage to pull off both character's personalities in a great way, but the story itself developed in a natural way that it's hard to pull off. Not only did your work was liked by many of the Aki/Yusei shipping community but also other people out there.

As a conclusion, I felt for the most part, the same way as AGreatfulReader (not just because i made an account to share a review for a eight year old fanfic) but because this shipping meant to me a lot way back in the day, even then, it's still a great piece of work. I'll give it a shot to the other stories in the meantime.

RobotFish, wherever you are, I hope you're doing well and having a nice day, thank you.
AGreatfulReader chapter 32 . 5/5/2019
I never quite thought that I would create an account on a fan-fiction website of all places to write a review of an eight-year-old narrative. I dismiss most fan-fiction on the grounds of it being either over-the-top, out-of-character, immature, or just plain ridiculous. The highly fictious, hopelessly romantic, and overly perfect “Romeo and Juliet” tales I see from most fandoms usually make me roll my eyes. As much as we all wish it was, life just isn't as clean as most fantasy makes it out to be.

That being said, "Our Little Secret" and your "That Long Awaited Day" one-shot are two of the most beautifully written developments/characterizations of two characters that will always hold a special place in my heart. As far as I'm concerned, the one-shot IS the cannon ending to 5Ds. I'm no stranger to Yu-Gi-Oh and love the original series too, but was the same age as Yusei Fudo and Akiza Iziniski when 5Ds released. I have always felt a personal connection to their extremely powerful story. Your stories slot right into the cannon and do exactly what they’re supposed to: They’re completely believable and feel just like the parts of the sub that were never written but were always supposed to be there.

Congratulations to Yusei and Akiza for finding together the most important, satisfying, and valuable parts of life in these works. Thank you RobotFish for bringing these powerful tales to life.
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