I love this fanfic so much thank you so much for creating such an amazing piece of writing that makes me come back seven years later when I first read this fanfic.

OMG you really play my emotions hehehe

This story is sooo damn good. I really love how you made Wally was such a jerk that I wish him die in a pit hole but then he change b3cause of Loovvee and then you made him surfer which I like it ( Д) YES! Because he somehow quite deserve it since he say those thing and made jinny reputation worse.

By the way, its a great story (), I finish it in 1 days, each chapter is getting me Exciting for more.

THANK YOU so much to let me read this.

not gotta lie this chapter was super cute, look at these two dorks XD seemore is such a good dude, honestly wish he became a hero like jinx kinda did. i bet him and wally would get along, assuming jealousy over jinx wasn't an issue lol

you fucking suck, worse drama ever, all secrets revealed within 1 day...

There is much pomp in this circumstance

To be honest I read the reviews first and thought...it might not be so good since there was some bad reviews. Then I read the good ones and, thought if this many people can say they were moved by this story then ill try it for myself.

I was not disappointed. This was a interesting story only getting better with each chapter.

*WARNING LONG REVIEW*
I read this story like idk 2 or so years ago but I just made an account and I knew this had to be one of the very first things to do with this new found account. Ok where to start...

I guess the first thing to say is OMG I'M SOOOO HAPPY YOU CHOSE FLINX FOR THIS STORY! Flinx is my all time OTP because it has soooo much room for theories, headcannons, etc. Flinx fits so well with this story about how you made Jinx choose to not go with Seemore but didn't go to Wally, I was crying.

You also I think nailed their relationship because I hate it when stories are like 50 chapters and the ship only gets together at the end but this, this was perfectly spaced with how they first got together to how they were tworn away and how they found each other again.

There was also a lot of humor in the at times a little dark story which made it AMAZING. You portrayed Wally the best I've seen with how he's NOT AN IDIOT and still has that fun loving hyper side but will get dead serious when needed.

You also showed Jinx perfectly in the way that she loved Wally and that's why she didn't tell him about Seemore.

Anyway, wow that was my first ever review for and I'm glad it was for this fanfic but wow was it a long review. In closing this was and forever will be my most favorite fanfic of all time and was one of the very first serious fanfics I've ever read.

Thank you for taking the time to write this story and share it with everyone. 3

It's like 3 in the morning and I might be a little high and sleep deprived but this seriously fucked me up and I'm crying

Oh man so beautiful! loved it

This chapter has brought me the closest to tears I have been in years.

I have so many mixed feelings about this story. I considered dropping it around the time See-More had Jinx leave Wally. That plot line of "jealous geeky guy takes the popular guys girl with blackmail" is incredibly overused.

That's not all, Wally is so much of an asshat in this story it's almost unbelievable. He's the biggest scumbag I think I've ever seen in the highschool scenes early on.

Finally, we get to what kills this story. Why is this story as long as it is? I don't mean that a story CAN'T be long, there are plenty of good fics out there that are MUCH longer than this, but this was so... Redundant.

We did the plot of Jinx leaving Wally because of blackmail, then when that doesn't work and Jinx abandons See-More we do literally the exact same plot line AGAIN with Wally finding Jinx and her leaving him AGAIN. You used the exact same plot line twice in the same story in a row and for the life of me I can't fathom why.

Overall, I was disappointed by this story. I was hoping with the amount of reviews it has that it would be worth the read. Sadly, I can't say that it was.

Enserio ._. Aun no supero lo de See-more. Eso fue demasiado fuerte ._.

Es lo mas triste que haya leído jamas

Te suplico que hagas algo (una historia de un capítulo) donde él se libera del hielo TuT. Seria grandioso qué él piense lo de que nunca alguien pisaria esa habitación de nuevo y luego se liberé. Tal lo libere jinx años después
Eso fue MUY triste! TTTUTTT
Por favor continúe con un siguiente libro de esto ;-;

XD civil war

Rayos rayos rayos Xdd
Estoy leyendo esta historia por segunda vez XD

Shit shit shit shit c: