Could you please update you fanfiction in the dark

I'm kind of enjoying this take on the circumstances of the group. The gradual - and grudging - acceptance of Ash's situation is something that I think is going to occur in cannon for a short time, and the fight between him and Emily is believeable.

People make mistakes. One of the basic tenants of life is that we are ultimately flawed beings with complex emotions that not all of us understand as we feel them, and I think you show a good portrayal of that without getting too "The Old Man and the Sea" on it.

Well done, and I think I'll keep an eye on this little gem in the sadly lacking Misfile shelf.

A nice read!

I for one am glad to see an update Can't wait for the next one. I would ask that it take less than six years to get it though, but hey whatever works I guess. Love the ending to the chapter btw, very full of emotion.

Interesting.
Borys

I was most certainly not expecting such an ending. Nevertheless, it's quite good, better written than 'Tension' I think, which itself was good. Oh, I almost forgot, numbers under ten are always written out rather than using the number itself. Thus, 2 centuries should have been two centuries.

Whoohoo! Can't wait for the next chapter! I just got to the final point of misfire, and I have to say, it really is time that Ash started accepting this, not fighting it. This story is awesome!

MOAR

Pretty good, I look forward to more.

Pretty cool so far. I'd love to see more, if you're still around.

Huzzah for self destructive coping mechanisms, and huzzah for irony!

Seriously though, I enjoyed this and I hope the long time since its posting doesn't mean you've given up on it. There isn't nearly enough Misfile fanfiction as it is.