Nice exploration of the conflict that was Joshua through Season One. I appreciate your trying the new and different style (kudos!), and think it well captures Joshua's own likely confusion as he discovered human emotions. I'd bet the muddled questions are pretty 'spot on' at describing his journey.

Thanks for sharing.

I think this might have been one of the most thoughtful and intelligent things I've ever read! I LOVED IT, loved the deep insight, loved the format, really there was nothing I would have changed :) I wish everyone put this much effort into their fics.

On a side note, this has made me want to write my first V fic. I'm goin in! Although my idea is quite different from this, I wanna get into this fandom :D

I'd love to write something similar for my favourite character, but I don't think I could pull off something half this nice!

Anyway, before I get too of-topic, thanks for a beautiful insight into an awesome character :)

RXP

That was an absolutely fascinating read. It was worded so well that it sounded like poetry to me. Great character sketch. Really amazing writing style!

Another beautiful story. You did a great job getting into Joshua's mind, I love it.

Oh Wow, this was just...wow.

The look inside Joshua's head as he becomes more and more involved with the Fifth Column and his growing faith in their cause is awesome. The bit about Lisa not being a Queen yet and then, after the scene in the S1 finale, when he sees a queen...awesome.

Great Job!

WOW! That was powerful and intense. I felt that I was inside Joshua's head and seeing his thoughts and feeling what he was feeling. Kudos to you for writing a difficult and complex character well. I think you tried a different approach and it worked. :)

Bravo!

Hope to see more from you and hopefully featuring more J/L goodness. Happy writing! :)