Naru Male-Dalish Elf-Rogue.

Very good story.

love it! Maybe let naru make a deal with the desire demon to restore her chakra

Off to an interesting start, I hope Sasuke dies a real painful death later on or something XD! Keep the good work coming looking forward to reading more !

interesting story please update soon

I'd say keep the basic human noble, AKA Aedan as is as one of the possible characters if I understand what you asked with the authors note.

Ohh, Shinobi from the leaf with no Chakra, head out into a new world. This is gonna be interesting! Hey Ryu, If you need any OC's, I have a Dragon Age Origins OC character for a fic I might post in a few weeks. give me a holler and I'll give you his Character page.

It's 'rogue', not 'rouge'.

Absolutely brilliant start. If you're interested, pertaining to pairings, Naru/Leliana would be great. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.

That little sh*t Sasuke! If it was me, I would shove a Hidden blade through his damn throat! Keep it up man, oh, and you can use Amaya, Yoru, and Ichimi, in this if you want.

Nice story but, can there be one where Naruto still have his/her chakra? All of them seem to be with Naru or Naruto lost her powers and it would be a change of pace. Also imagine the scandal the Chantry will spout due to Naru having her chakra but doing things Mage dream and vise versa.