Great job!

The dialogue was really good. A lot of people have a hard time capturing a character's essence through how they speak, but you obviously don't. Very well done. I loved the story.

I just found this story, but can I just say.. Wow! It was well written, the characters were just like from the books, and the story line! The story was sweet and sexy. I love the final chapter whenhe comes to her in the middle of the night. Very well done!

Lovely story. I enjoyed it through and through. Thanks for sharing! Take care!

I hardly ever take time to review stories, which is flaw that needs correcting. But I will tell you that I loved this, not only because it's wonderfully written and surprisingly in character, but because I had the EXACT same idea for a story and now feel bad for not having written it before. I'm too lazy to log in but my username is HolmesWoman. Keep writing! :)

This is more a review for the entire thing than for the chapter because I've just read them all in a row. :)

Wow, I think I'm actually crying a bit that was so beautiful. I... Speechless. You got the characterisation spot on and the storyline was so sweet. 3

I'll definitely be looking out for more of your writing. :)

Chelsey x

While the lemon was probably my favorite part, I also loved:

"She sounds delightful."

Albus hesitated. "Not really..."

lol

Their little bit of wordplay amused me too. I definitely think it's in character.

AL

Thus far, fabulous. I look forward to the next few chapters! Well written and wonderful.

AL

O.O This is amazing-ness. You're a genuis dear MMADfan! I am so going to check out your other works you talk about at the bottom of each chapter. :)

Fantastic story. I love the interactions between Albus and Minerva, and of course the last chapter was wonderful. I read this on Petulant Poetess first, but when I saw it on here, well, who am I to turn up a good fic twice? :P I would love to see the tea with Madam Dumbledore, that would be amusing.

Really well written, overall adorable. Thank you very much, and I hope that you write more ADMM soon. :)

MtF

Wonderful!

Great story all round! Your dialogue is great and your lemons very well written. The romance is believable and sensual, very touching.

Excellent work!

Lovely chapter! It made my study break! :)

I hope you'll update soon! Really love this story! And I'm so looking forward to meeting Albus' mum!

HOT HOT HOT!

Just what the GLM needs on a cold day with snow on the ground.

I loooove how Albus comes to her in the middle of the night and declares his intentions and feelings to her. He seems very much in character, wanting to court her and present her with presents, yet still wanting and needing to be closer to her.

And of course their evening together was absolutely perfect. Steamy and tender while showcasing the passion!

Great job!

OOPS! I missed reviewing a chapter before you posted the next one. Sorry about that.

The charmed box sounds very pretty and very amusing. I could easily see something like that catching Albus' eyes as he strolled down the street. I'm happy he went back at lunchtime to buy it for her. He's starting to woo her in his own special way.

I was disappointed, too, that his work took him abroad. At least she received the lovely and unexpected present and note!