I fucking love it,I can't explain how much it made me go in hysterical laughter,I JUST FUCKING ENJOYED THE LEMON AND OMG!*squealing like a five year old.

This is one interesting SasuNaru Vampfict!

FUCKKKK I love this. You need to make this into an actual story...And totally an mpreg..please~

Omg I love this you have to make it into an actual story maybe even an mpreg ughhhhhh I love this

Sasuke:( WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT MEAN, THAT SHE THINKS YOUR COOL? WHY DONT YOU WEAR A MOTHERFUCKING JACKET SO SHE WONT THINK THAT? ) OMG! LMAO at that part. He was so fucking hilarious trying to figure out what the 'black box' meant by singing all that shit! When he was trying to figure out the definition of booty I died laughing. Is that like pirates gold or something? And the 'dead cock'! I just cant stop laughing! LOL! XD

i luvd ths story! i even read it twice :-D

Awesome! Imma keep reading!

I just find the mental image of Sasuke ranting at a speaker absolutely halarious.

The part that really got me was that Sasuke thought Naruto was using a dead cock and had ripped it off some guy and was fine with it. That just made me lol.

woot that was aesome I'm so favoring this and I cant wait to read the sequel

Me: Nice lemon, very nice, but it would be so cool if you made this into like a series or something. Oh, and Tobi?

Tobi: Yesh, Kohana?

Me:(Pulls note off my forhead and slaps one on his that says

'Kohana OWNS my ass.' on his.)Don' . may be adorable, but I do NOT liked being touched.

Tobi: Y-yes, ma'am. Ooooohhhhh, look at all that little stars, dance, stars, DANCE!(Falls on the floor.)

hey bad writer, but i think you are not a bad writer.

the proof is i like your story, so i put your story in my site at .com

is that okey with you. thanks for your story.

best regard,

Yusuf (ucupneptune)

You have got to stop calling yourself a bad writer... Because, believe it or not, this was damn GOOD! Maybe if you start writing actual summaries instead of telling readers that your work is crap you would get more readers who would await every update from you. I really enjoyed your story and not just the fucking (Though that was as hot as hell! 8: D (If you're wondering what that is it's an emoticon of a smiling person having a nosebleed. :D ) ). I hope to hear from you again.

loved it! but i want more :(

hope you'll write a sequel

your story is super good!xD