Reviews for Twist of Fate |
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Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 You fall off the Earth? o_0 |
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 4 . 1/16/2013 Great! |
Shakespeare's Lemonade chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 Wow, this was really good. I stopped reading and writing Twilight stories a long time ago, but I like what you're doing with Leah. I may not read on since it's rated M, and I tend not to like those sorts of stories, but I think this was a great opening. I love how you got into Leah's character and made her more sympathetic. I didn't like how she was portrayed as just mean and bitter in the books. No one is that one-dimensional. |
domo2010 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012 Really good!More please(: |
stilinskimccall2411 chapter 4 . 4/28/2012 you are officially awesome.i love a good Leah and Paul story |
Wolfy chapter 4 . 4/27/2012 Gah this red head bitch is still around smh, just throw Bellabitch to her and be done. |
Wolfy chapter 2 . 4/27/2012 I like the story I do, but the calling her Dani is stupid as hell and if she doesn't like the nick name then just call her Leah and why would she not like Lee when Lee Lee is Sam's nick name for her? Also the res is a small tight community where gosip spreads how is it nobody knows Paul has a kid and I would think when he first phased he wouldn't have had the control to block thinking of her. I think him having a kid is pointless anway. That's all, still like the story. |
brankel1 chapter 4 . 4/27/2012 I totally love Paul told her about is good with they will be alright. |
me chapter 3 . 10/20/2011 you need to write more this stories awesome i'm giving u a deadline chapter 4 needs to be up by monday |
Baby doll chapter 3 . 9/18/2011 You need to write more to this! Bloody he'll I was crying after reading this! |
Baby doll chapter 3 . 9/18/2011 You need to write more to this! Bloody he'll I was crying after reading this! |
Jaspers Jaime chapter 1 . 8/19/2011 ohhh its so nice to see the change from leahs pov, instead of a macho male. Good work Mione, Love it :) |
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 3 . 7/17/2011 Great chapter |
LittleLoneWolfx chapter 3 . 7/12/2011 Ohh I can't believe she tried to kill herself. And Paul imprinted on her..sort of. I can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up! Update soon :) |
atotheed chapter 3 . 7/11/2011 awww, I feel so bad that Leah felt that was they only way to escape her pain. Paul's gonna nurse her back to health, I hope and she'll begin to see that she can have the same thing as Sam and Emily :) |