Awwwwwww. Good deduction sequences!

That was cute. I would have liked more of John talking, but Sherlock definitely talks a lot more than John so it makes sense for the story to be mostly him.

You did a great job at making a believable situation and dialogue...er...thoughts I should say. That is very much Sherlock's personality and the way that he would think and you paid a lot of attention to detail which is a must for him.

Thank you for the story, please continue writing and I wish you luck!

A few minor spelling errors, but overall, I absolutely love this. I love moments between them...and I love the way you got into Sherlock's head, we are so often in John's because of the nature of the series, and it is so nice to read the inner workings of a man who clearly does have so many feelings and thoughts for John.

Thanks for writing, you made my night!

So cute!

that was lovely! a very nice little bit of fluff.

I liked it! Good stuff.